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for Across the Square

by alinnapuomi

schedule July 17, 2012 at 12:00 AM
So now Patrick's a little creeper/stalker too! lol

And I most certainly agree with him; I wouldn't want to start seeing someone if they're in love with someone else. And also, if they're having sex with someone else. I'm like Patrick; not good with sharing. lol So..Issac will have to give up Jerry if he wants to be with Patrick. Seems reasonable. Jerry and him have been fuck buddies for quite awhile. It's time Issac has a relationship on his own.

Great chapter Alinna; looking forward to the next one! :)
schedule July 11, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Me thinks Jerry is a "tad" (haha) jealous!

And good for Issac for sticking up for Patrick! Loved his line, "At least we're not fucking in front of you like you and Ty do to me." That was hysterical! :)

I wonder how Patrick will take Issac's explanation about his relationship w/Jerry?
person oo
schedule July 10, 2012 at 12:00 AM
i like it so far.
schedule July 3, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Well I'm thrilled Issac finally got to talk to Mr. Perfect, aka Patrick. Although offering a birthday bj was kinda whorish I think. I'm surprised Patrick went for it. I mean, maybe offering to take him out to lunch or dinner would be appropriate, but a bj, not so much.

I hope Patrick doesn't think Issac is 'easy'.

Looking forward to more! I'm sure Jerry will be pleasantly surprised to see him in the a.m. Oh, and why did Patrick ask about Jerry? Did he see something in the way Jerry and Issac interact to make him think they were together?
schedule June 26, 2012 at 12:00 AM
You said they're all blind in love. Well, if Ty was really in love with Jerry, he wouldn't want to be with anyone else and he wouldn't want Jerry to be either. And the same for Jerry. If they were truly in love with each other, they'd only want to be with that person and the thought of their lover being with someone else would sicken them. Well, maybe that's just me. I don't like to share. lol But....as long as they're all on the same page and no one gets hurt, all the more power to them. Maybe they could make it a threesome? Or a foursome if Mr. Perfect is willing. lol Although I have a feeling Issac will want him all to himself!

I'm looking forward to their apartment meeting. :)
schedule June 26, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I'm quite interested in where this is going. They all have interesting kinda weird relationships. Can't wait for more! :D
schedule June 19, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Hahah Alinna! It seems I'm the only one reviewing a lot of stories! Yup, just me an' you girl. (you ARE a girl, right? I guess I was assuming b/c of your name, but then again, you know what they say when you assume! :) )

Oh, and you can put the pitchfork down; the chapter was perfect! lol

So Issac and Jerry have a 'special' relationship, do they? lol And Ty is ok with this. Hmmmm, then why don't they just make it a three-way? Why is Ty against that? That way he'd be getting some of Issac too. hahhah Believe me, I've read a lot of stories recently with three-ways.

Anyway, awesomely smutty chapter Alinna! And boy can you write smut! :)
schedule June 12, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Interesting new story! I'm looking forward to reading more about Mr. Perfect. lol :)