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My last review wasn't proofread lol
hmm I think my biggest problem with ty
Is that you hardly see any of his character
Yes, jerry seems to have feelings for him.
But Issac doesn't seem to have any.
So I don't see a foursome happening long term.
Short term probably/possibly.
And Patrick seems more like a voyeur
At this point and less of a focal point,
Although Ty does too.
I think Isaac would choose Jerry hands down.
Not to say that Patrick doesn't have an
awesome body.... :)

Jerry/Ty's relationship seems corrupt somehow.
Ty getting his rocks off with random guys.
And Jerry's emotional/sexual relationship
with Isaac.
Then Ty's leaving all the time.
What if Ty stops traveling.
Would he stop the random guys?
Would Jerry stop with Isaac?
Sadly I think the answer is no to both of those.
If they are happy, Kudos.

Isaac acts like he really loves Jerry.


I honestly can't guess where this is going.
So I demand many updates,
perhaps since you are in love with Ty
a chapter... that shows why?

Secretly I've always wanted a back scratcher.
when I was just a little niña.
I begged father christmas for one,
I got an easy bake oven instead.
Grr.
lol

Man I'm bored.
Think I'm going to go write now lol

SEXY

Think hey should ditch Ty and have a threesome themselves :)

Well that was interesting. Isaac turned down Patrick, hopefully his wishes for perfection don't mess things up. It's always dangerous to hope for perfection from imperfect humans. Like Patrick said.
Thanks for the update.

I don't know where I've been hiding that I missed a chapter! lol

And what a chapter! Wow, that Patrick never ceases to surprise me. heheh

Now he wants to watch Issac and Jerry going at it for 'educational purposes only', yeah right. lol

But he won't be like Ty and just let them be together whenever they want. Which of course is understandable. But really, does Ty really love Jerry? I think if he really, really loved him, he would HATE the thought of his b/f screwing around on him, even if it is with his bff. That might be worse. Who's to say they wouldn't fall in love with each other? Then where would Ty be? lol

Ok, on to the next chapter.

Ok, so I got sidetracked and RL got in the way of reading this chapter straight through. Do you know how frustrating it is to start reading a chapter with sex in it, only to be interrupted, to drive this one there, to take this one there, to sit in the waiting room while my kid has his wisdom teeth taken out.....but I finally finished it! lol

So Patrick. Is he for real? He knows Issac is in love with Jerry and now he knows Jerry is also in love with Issac. Patrick wants his relationship with Issac to work out, but Jerry's in the way so he figures they can ALL be together? Oh, but then you gotta throw in that d-bag Ty. I think Patrick and Ty are gonna clash big time. Ty is way too controlling for someone like Patrick, who seems like he likes to be in control also. But Ty's control isn't healthy; he expects Jerry home at a certain time...but wait, they're not married. Ty is rarely there, how can Jerry stand to be controlled like that?

Anyway, I have heard of some three-way relationships in the past year; it seems to be the trend nowadays. But a four-way relationship, with two dominant personalities, for lack of a better word, would that work? Would all four of them be having sex? Or just Issac/Jerry, Issac/Patrick, Jerry/Issac and Jerry/Ty? Or would Ty get to be with Issac and Patrick with Jerry and Patrick and Ty together? That I can't see. lol

Ok, I can't wait to read about the talk Patrick's gonna have with Ty! lol

You know alinna, I always jot down notes when I'm reading a chapter so I don't forget what comes to mind when I'm reviewing. But naturally I only wrote one note down and I forgot to look at it. Everything else was just my stream of consciousness. Is that the correct spelling? I'm too lazy to look it up.

Ok, I forgot to mention that I'm surprised Jerry didn't put a condom on. Wouldn't that be something Patrick would insist on, especially since we (read: they) don't really know for sure where Ty has been when he goes off on his business trips. And why wouldn't Issac insist on this also?

I have been following this story since the beginning and been anguished by Isaac's indecisive about Jerry. Jerry who I think is an ass. How he's been using their friendship for easy access really pisses me off. And that very good cause rarely fics raises this kind of feelings in me and every time I'm in AFF I go to checkup for updates. And I'm also really scared that Patrick is going to hustle Isaac, who has used so much time and energy to idolize him, and if Patrick is a douchebag it'll break Isaac to pieces. And that would be horrible and utterly sad. And I feel so sorry for him cause he's so lonely and in desperate need to find someone his own.
Yeah, I'm totally hooked as you can see.

I see Patrick's point so much it's hard for me to think that Issac doesn't. Issac needs to put himself in Patrick's position. Then see how he feels.

Yes, maybe Issac feels more towards Jerry; actually I'm sure he does, otherwise it would be no big deal to tell him the "friends with benefits" thing is out the window. I'm sure Jerry will miss it too. Especially since it seems Ty is gone so much. Even though they love each other as friends, and have buddy sex when it's convenient for Jerry (when Ty's not around, which is a lot) Patrick's right; they're using each other.

Issac needs a 'real' relationship with someone. Someone like Patrick. Don't fuck this up Issac! lol Jerry will still be your friend. I'm sure it would take a helluva lot more than not sleeping with him to stop him from being Issac's BFF.

As always, looking forward to more; especially The Talk! :)

I think Issac should stop mentioning Jerry's name when Patrick doesn't bring him up. It's a sore spot and it only makes Patrick jealous. I don't blame Patrick at all. Issac is holding onto Jerry, but why? Jerry has Ty. Jerry's his best friend. Can't he be JUST his best friend w/o benefits? Hell shit, it's not like Jerry's gonna dump Ty anytime soon to be with Issac.

Here's Patrick; the guy Issac's been lusting after (and Patrick pretty much admitted the same) for so long he's gonna blow it with him b/c he can't give up sex with Jerry.

Can't wait for more! :) Hahah, one of my captcha words is cumstances, lol. (whatever that means! I think so many of those words are made up; I used to Google some of them and there was never a listing....)

great chapter! I wonder why Jerry is being so antisocial! Can't wait for the next one!