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Quite a nosy boss Isaac have. Personal life is just that - personal. Maybe he's hots for Isaac too. Just kidding...lol
Aw, now they both have rings. How sweet!
Patrick's great, he wants to share his life with Isaac not just sex him up.

Ha, I like your note on the bottom about my last review: it's hard to get tips when Jerry finishes so fast. lol How true. Or Patrick could use it as a tip on WHAT NOT TO DO IN BED!

I was surprised at Issac's boss asking all those personal questions. I still don't know how they're going to resolve this without one or more of them getting hurt.

As always, lookig forward to more! :)

i dont like ty
at all.
there i said it.
if he could die
i would be cool with it
hmmm
i dont know how long before it goes tits up
but im going to enjoy the cuddling while it lasts
maybe ty will die in a car crash or something
waiting to see :)

I knew it, that Ty would propose and then all's tangled even more. I'm excited how it all will sort out. And I loved it that Isaac and Patrick are both falling in love and with each other. It's like a sugary coating.
But I still object Jerry; what was he thinking posting a ring to Isaac - you can't eat and save your cake (ooh, I hate that saying). Hmm. Let's see how this turned out.
Wonderful chapter, thank you so much for it.

I have also heard that guys who have had lots of anal sex don't need lube b/c they open pretty easily, or something to that effect. lol

And did you know bubble wrap is a great stress reliever? Heard it on the radio and sales of bubble wrap in my area went up exponentially! hahah

So...Ty wants to marry Jerry, Jerry wants to marry Ty AND Issac, Issac wants to marry Jerry and most probably Patrick and Patrick wants to marry Issac and would probably take Jerry as a consolation prize. Did I get that all straight? lol

What a complicated web they have weaved. I also think Patrick likes being in the middle of it all, what with him having to discuss all this with Ty all the time. lol I think it makes him feel important. Remember, he was pretty much all alone, across the square, until he met Issac and Jerry and now his world revolves around these three (including Ty) people.

Great chapter Alinna! :)

man this chapter pulled on
the heart strings.
made my feelings all gooey
that Jerry rejected Ty
man poor Ty for one.
but also hearting that
Jerry got him a ring
I could almost see this
being a quartet,
like not living together
per say, but involved.

I really love this chapter.

Wow, that was sweet and hot. Finally! I like Patrick more and more. Hopefully Isaac really understand what a great guy he's. These feelings for Jerry might partly be cause of custom too. All isn't love thou it might seem that way... Hard to say!
You've really stuff them between a rock and a hard place. Amazing!
Thank you so much for the update! It was great! I'm wishing for more steamy hot love between I and P. =P

loving the smutty goodness. i think most fics just assume everything is just fine as to not bring uncomfortable questions into their story. real life is different of course. and my question is... how the hell do you have sex without lube that way.. wouldnt the friction.... well i don't even know now. it seems like like it would be superdry... unless he somehow lubed himself everyday. don't get it. but super hot either way. :) what panties? *evil smirk*

i really like where this chapter went. It was sexy as hell. With one guy sitting on the others lap... i think is one of the sexier positions. So intimate and hot.

Wow alinna, you really put so many questions in my mind with your note at the bottom of the chapter. lol

So Ty has TWO big things then, but Patrick only knows one of them. Shit, I hope Ty isn't infected or something. That's the first thing I always think of. But then he's be playing it safe w/Jerry. You said he loves Jerry so much, so that tells me he wouldn't risk Jerry's life and not use protection.

And yes, you did bring up a good point: if Patrick hasn't had sex in such a long time, then why did he have a test done recently? My guess is that whoever he was with was sick and he had to keep getting tested every six months or so. I don't know, I could be way off base. Or....maybe he had the test done when he first noticed Issac, just on the off chance they'd meet. That of course would be really presumptuous of him, not even knowing if Issac was gay, OR interested in him. lol

Ok this chapter: well, they FINALLY did it! Horray! :) Now maybe Issac can learn to live with someone other than Jerry. Maybe Patrick will satisfy him so much more than Jerry (at least in the staying department, lol) that Issac's sex days with Jerry will be but a fond memory. Ha, fat chance. He loves Jerry too much to give him up that way.

I'm really looking forward to the next chapter alinna! Shit, I don't know which story I love more; this one or "Turn Around". :)

Omg I'm confused. Ok, Jerry pretty much admitted he's in love with Issac when he said if he married Ty, he couldn't marry Issac.

Patrick is still a voyeur hanging out when cupcake and Jerry are going at it. Jerry's going away w/Ty and Issac said the time would be right then for him and Patrick to finally do it? And Patrick agreed. This is where I'm confused. I thought Patrick wasn't going to do ANYTHING with Issac until everything with Ty was straightened out AND Issac and Jerry's feelings for each other were straightened out. But now Issac is giving Patrick bj's? Was this the first time? And now all of a sudden, Patrick is willing to go all the way with Issac and vice-versa. They seem to be contradicting themselves from previous chapters. Unless I'm just totally misunderstanding the situation.

On a separate note: I can't wait to find out what Jerry bought and mailed to Issac! :)

And why is Patrick being so secretive about his conversations and emails with Ty?

And thank you for clearing up the whole condom issue alinna. :) I'm wondering if Patrick will need to wear one, for cupcake's sake. Where has he dipped his stick recently? Well, not recently, since he met Issac, but before that? lol Meh, you know what I mean. =)