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by alinnapuomi

schedule January 20, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Well, don't they say swallow plenty of protein for breakfast? lol

Hey Alinna! Welcome back! I've missed your two stories! :)

It's interesting to see Ty acting pretty friendly towards Issac. Since we thought he hated him and all. I do think they should let Patrick and Jerry know though, what's been going on. Full disclosure and no secrets; otherwise their foursome will fall apart.

Looking forward to more! :)
person Sarkukka
schedule January 16, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I don't actually have anything else to say, but... I'm so happy that this is continuing.
Hmm, and maybe there is still hope with Ty.
Thank you so much for the update. It was really nice.
person Sarkukka
schedule December 17, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Oh, christmas game early with this update. I've missed the boys. And they're finally settling down all together, that's amazing!
And I disagreed with Patrick, Isaac really should just keep his thoughts in his crotch! Hilarious!
Thank you for the update! It's a really wonderful surprise. Welcome back to this fic. *hugs*
person Avelynn
schedule December 16, 2012 at 12:00 AM
... ö.ö

lol

xDDDDD
Isaac is cute xDDDD
schedule December 16, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Hey alinna! Welcome back! :)

So this will be very interesting to see how this foursome will work. I can see Ty getting jealous and 'pouting' when Jerry and Issac want to be together w/o him. lol
person eroburn
schedule September 30, 2012 at 12:00 AM
i adore this chapter.
house needs to be huge
one half for them
and one half for ty and jerry
or they could be neighbors ^_^
person Sarkukka
schedule September 26, 2012 at 12:00 AM
OMG! That was a great ending. Now I'm all heart and kisses! <3<3
Let's see how it goes after this. lol
Thanks for the update! It was great.
schedule September 26, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Wow, Patrick said those three little words. lol But isn't he rushing things with moving in so quickly and then looking for a house together. That's like big commitment stuff. lol

What is DIYA?

I wonder if Issac will tell Jerry what Patrick said. (The I love you part) Jerry is still hoping Patrick will be their (his and Issac's) savior and figure out how they can all be together. Sort of all of them. Not sure about where Ty will fit in....
person eroburn
schedule September 18, 2012 at 12:00 AM
i think u should head back towards the light.
but.. if u wanna go down the rabbit hole
well i wont try to stop u
schedule September 18, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Fucking just fuck me. lol Funny line!

So now Patrick's out at work and he doesn't seem to care. And his employees don't seem to care which is great.

Cute chapter alinna. It showed Patrick and Issac's playfulness. :)