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Love the way you ended the Pawn with a cliff hanger. Satisfying. I'm looking forward to more stories!

Chapter 31. Yay! An update! I'm so happy! It's made my day! And I know the other stories you've updated will continue to make my weekend once I get to them. Thank you very much!

Your story has such depth and background in it !
The interaction between Pourn and Cheyena is so fascinating.
A favourite scene of mine would be the part where Cheyena ties Pourn up and wants a cuddle from him! How adorable he is =)
It's a delightful read =)

Looking forward to your next update~

lol I love this story! Love the writing reminds me of Rosencrantz and Guildenstern are dead! Which I rewatched the other night and could not stop laughing Iforgot how much I loved it. And now you give us this! It's perfect and can't wait to read more. I want to know how the whole Sol and Lun thing is going to work out. Your hints are absolutely tantalizing! More please.

Chapter 29. LOL! I'm wondering now which of the many wards did Shun have that Un has the boy's balls in his mouth. Poor Pourn getting assigned a friend. Does this mean that Ashia and Cheyena are still rolling around on the ground fighting after Ashia beat Cheyena's face into the ground?

Chapter 28. LOLOL! Role playing. Can't wait to read more of that! Thanks for the update!

Chapter 27. Woo! I love this chapter! I'm so looking forward to the next one. Thanks for the update!

I am really enjoying this tale of medieval? kingdoms and royalty. As always in all your work the characters are wonderful, unique and colorful. This story has quite a different tone to it compared to your other stories. Theres's a greek tragedy like element to it, it's a little dark and angsty which is really working for this story.....I hope all the dark edgy, angsty goodness you've got going on continues throughout the story. Please no Fluff!! ....not that i think you would actually destroy this story with fluffiness and rainbows and hearts

On a more detailed note some of "lessons" confused me a bit, the explaining of the genealogy in particular and will have to go back and read again. It was all a bit difficult to follow especially the parts relating to the imperial kingdom, and twins, and only children and bastards......The worlds you build in your work are often based on elaborate and complex relationships whether between family's, people, or race. At times these interactions and relationships are difficult to follow because there is so much vital info thrown at you all at once - it's like bullet point facts with lines and arrows connecting some, with a timeline included, other points highlighted, relationships noted etc...(am i making sense!?) anyway.... info that as a mindmap/drawing is relatively easy to follow, when described to you with just words, in a couple of condensed paragraphs, all that information you are trying to impart becomes difficult to comprehend completely and fully understand. I guess what i'm trying to say is .. be aware of the "info dump"...

Thanks for writing chapter 26. I know how hard that was for you. Big hugs!

Chapter 26. Hm... The end of the chapter had me wondering. Who? And I won't say anymore so as not to spoil the chapter for others just reading the review and haven't read it. Thanks for the update!