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for The Life of a Moon Child

by melbell20

person oo
schedule June 15, 2012 at 12:00 AM
i like it. its going well.
person Moose
schedule June 15, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Please continue.... nothin else i can say. its simply awesome.
schedule June 14, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I like the background part of this chapter. It makes everything make much more sense. I'm still not sure my he doesn't like Liam. Liam seems kinda upset about him not knowing as well. great job and looking forward to see what's next. :)
person reader1962
schedule June 14, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I am enjoying the set up. I am glad that Liam did not go with the suggestion to keep Shae occupied with sex on the trip back to his home.
person HugAZombie
schedule June 14, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Absolutely love it :) I look forward to more :)
person Amy
schedule June 14, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I LOVE HIS STORY!! I also would love to proofread and edit it of you're still looking for someone;) email me at amygoober@yahoo.com if you're interested...
person Amy
schedule June 14, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I LOVE HIS STORY!! I also would love to proofread and edit it of you're still looking for someone;) email me at amygoober@yahoo.com if you're interested...
person miles
schedule June 14, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Another great chapter ! Angsty but I like it !
Can't wait for more...
person Def
schedule June 14, 2012 at 12:00 AM
T-T for this chp and yaay for next chp. i didnt see any mistake tho i’m not really sure bc i T-T my eyes’r blurred. it’s not really tht angsty but idkw i T-T
schedule June 14, 2012 at 12:00 AM
How dare you end the chapter with FML!!! Lol! Please more more more more!!!!!