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for Love Affair

by Librablueberry19

person gntlwspr
schedule June 27, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Hope you update soon. Some of the dialog during sex is a little stupid lol- the moans in all caps, but I am curious to see where their relationship goes. The story could also use some editing for typos, grammar, etc. But otherwise I like it and hope you update!
person Jen
schedule March 18, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I like it! I'm interested to see how it progresses and how their relationship grows. I'd like oh ear more about rachaels relationship with Sheldon is progressing as well.
person Jess
schedule January 27, 2013 at 12:00 AM
So far I enjoy your story but my brain keeps going back to one thing. In the first few paragraphs you say the reunion is in San Francisco but they fly into LAX airport. San Franicsco is about 9 hours drive away from LA. They should be flying into SFO.