rate_review Reviews

it's sweet in it's simplicity. I would like to see where this leads, if it leads anywhere. All in all it's a good story with the potencial to do great things. :)

That was so sweet and hot at the same time. I love this! Elizabeth is intense! and Jordan is lovely.... *but still wants to trade places with Jordan*
this was elegantly written. thank you for sharing.

If that's what one review did, imagine what another could do?

I'm liking this story very much. At first I thought it was just a smutty one shot, but you know, I'm really intrigued by your characters. Especially ELizabeth. SHould you chose to churn another chapter out, I'd be grateful - but for now, I think I'll just tell you about how much I liked these ones you have up already.

Excellent work.

I am so glad to know that this won't be a one hit wonder that'll leave me just anxious for more... unless you're just teasing me with the 'Break her own rule' thing... I look forward to the continuation.