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March 11, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Another great chapter. It's great when Elizabeth seems to disappoint Jordan, but then comes right back and gives her a nice surprise. I hope you find it in you to give us another chapter. It would be nice to see where their relationship goes and what may/may not get in the way.
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February 25, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Great characters, nice development and pacing, hot sex... fantastic story!
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February 19, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I've been following this for a while now. And honestly, I have grown really, really fond of Jordan and Elizabeth. I like how you write, how we can feel what the characters are feeling - Elizabeth's inner conflict and constant return to Jordan, Jordan's submission and attraction... it's all wonderful. I also enjoy how you write your smut - tastefully, yet still erotic. I really would like to see more from you eventually :)
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February 18, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I don't think words can aptly describe the amount of love I have for your writing, and this story. I'm finding that I actually don't mind that it took you so long to update, and I was more relived by the fact that it was actually updated.
I do hope to see more from you in the future ^^
I do hope to see more from you in the future ^^
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December 18, 2012 at 12:00 AM
This is such a great story! Love it so much!! So glad you didn't decide to stop writing it. Your writing style is to die for. Please keep writing if not this story then another. okay i will stop being all fangirl maybe >.> <.<
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November 7, 2012 at 12:00 AM
All right, I'm not gonna lie I was a bit skeptic reading this and then I decide to give it a shot and I am entertain. So kudos. It's a nice read, which I'm glad to read something, It's a good break from writing. So I'm guessing you're gonna roll with this. So I'll be waiting for more chapters.
^_^
^_^
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November 5, 2012 at 12:00 AM
This story has got me hooked! The first chapter was amazing. I can imagine the scene quite well. The second and third chapters were also great. I especially love the conflicted feelings Elizabeth has and how Jordan seems to effortlessly make the other girl long for her. I hope you upload the next chapter soon. Kudos!
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November 2, 2012 at 12:00 AM
wahhhhhhhhhhhhh that was so freaking hot!!!!!!! i love these two! thank you so much for updating! i didnt think i would get to read about these two again... such a lovely surprise... and please, if you do get inspired to write more about them, just letting you know that i will eagerly read any more updates... for serious
that was beautifully written and so so so so hot!!! lol i wish i had been on that train instead of jordan... (lol but i love her too).
thanks again
that was beautifully written and so so so so hot!!! lol i wish i had been on that train instead of jordan... (lol but i love her too).
thanks again
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November 2, 2012 at 12:00 AM
You, my dear, know how to write. I'm more than a little hot under the collar with that particular demonstration of literary prowess and I do so hope for another encore of your sweet seduction that started off with a simple train-ride. I bathe you richly in decadence while I wait patiently for your next update (no pressure though)
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October 1, 2012 at 12:00 AM
(Sorry if this duplicates, it doesn't look like the review worked)
I've read this story twice now and finally decided to review.
I enjoy this work immensely. Even though it appears you don't plan to continue, I hope you do. I don't often find well-written stories with proper spelling and grammar. And that's the short version of my opinion ;-)!
If you do decide to leave the story as it is, I hope you post more of your work. I have no doubts that I will find it equally enjoyable and engaging.
Sincerely,
That Chick with the Hair
I've read this story twice now and finally decided to review.
I enjoy this work immensely. Even though it appears you don't plan to continue, I hope you do. I don't often find well-written stories with proper spelling and grammar. And that's the short version of my opinion ;-)!
If you do decide to leave the story as it is, I hope you post more of your work. I have no doubts that I will find it equally enjoyable and engaging.
Sincerely,
That Chick with the Hair