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Totally confused and thrown off by Matt's appearance, not to mention the fact that he's some sick wife beating, asshat. I dunno, I kinda enjoyed the idea of a super smart, sugar mama blonde bombshell over this gold digging liar. I feel for jordon, I really do, I hope we get to know more about her, like what her major is, and what her hobbies are etc.

You're seriously gonna end it there!?!
Talk about keeping us on the hook!
Update soon! I'm eager to what you have in store for us to read next!

I really liked the last chapter. I was on edge the whole time, and now I'm anxious to find out what happens next. Update soon!

I love you. Please update soon.

I enjoy your story a great deal. I've read each chapter a few times and love the natural, realistic dynamic between Elizabeth and Jordan. The erotic aspects are well-written and feel real while still rounding out well with actual storyline. A difficult balance to achieve. You seem equally adept at both and that is no small compliment as I often find that authors are noticeably more capable at either storyline or erotica but not both. They require a different skillset and, well, this is excellent. No need for me to ramble beyond that, I suppose. *small smile* Please continue! I'm eager to see where this goes!

Wow that was a great twist. But it makes a lot of sense with the big house and all. Great twist I can't wait to see what happens

I'm really glad to see this story continuing. I wish I could have got a picture of my facial expression when suddenly a wild husband appeared. That was a totally unexpected twist, but does explain a lot. Thank you for not making this into an awkward threesome. Can't wait to see where this goes!

This is definitely one of the best originals I've read on here. Especially one so sexy that actually has a nice plot. I. Must. Have. An. Update D:

such a lovely surprise to see this updated! there is a criminal lack of hot femslash with interesting characters and i love you for writing this so beautifully!! lol makes my heart beat faster how sweet and smexy this is! I hope elizabeth starts to realise how awesome jordan is. but i also like how spoilt/incontrol elizabeth is.
i LOVE these two!!
thank you for updating!!
i love how this is turning into an actual story!!
I LOVE Jordan!!

I do not think there are enough words in the human language to express how happy I am to see this update. I can honestly say that you are working your way into the top slots of my favourite stories. No pressure though. Keep doing what you enjoy and I'll wait for the next instalment. :)