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This is really the only story I keep up with on this site, and I've been with it since the beginning! Even though it hasn't been updated in over a year, I still check up on it every now and then to see if another chapter has been uploaded. I've reread it quite a few times! Definitely one of my favorites!

I love this story. The characters, the plot, the relationship Elizabeth and Jordan have. And just beautiful character developement. Hope you continue with it, but, I can see this as a final chapter. Well, I'm going to your profile now to see what else you've got.

This is such a great story. Alwaysquestion does a really good job at keeping the story moving in a forward direction. It could use a little more plot in with the sex in order to lengthen the chapters, but overall it's really good. Keep on writing!

I've just started reading, and I have to say; wow! I love this little story, and I truly hope you keep sharing your ideas for it! I've only made it to chapter 3, but I will definitely be following this one for updates. Elizabeth is an excellent lead; sultry, sexy, and assertive without being a jerk about it. Jordan is adorable, and her honest personality is just so...huggable! I like the writing style as well. It's precise and descriptive, with the only real con being that sometimes the story ends before I'd like it to. :)

Looking forward to seeing more, hun! Well wishes!

great writing awesome story but PLEASE you CAN NOT leave it hanging like that

It's tender, sweet and nice. And it's as much about saving Elizabeth from herself as it is about Jordan.

I'm so glad you've updated! This was a nice endearing chapter. It shows the tamer side of their "relationship," whatever it is. I'm happy to see Elizabeth acting more human (with emotions and not distancing herself from Jordan). Also, I like how Jordan is a bit more comfortable with herself around Elizabeth now. She's also asserting herself a little bit, which I think is good. She's really sweet to Elizabeth and I'm glad the older girl is appreciating that. You don't get many Jordans after all. ;)

Anyway, I hope you can update soon. Happy New Year (though a few days late)!

Finally, a new chapter! It feels like I've waited forever, but it was worth it. ;)

It was a bit dark and I felt some tension and the heavy emotions from the characters. It was good. It's nice to see Jordan speak out and Elizabeth break down and lose her cool for a change.

Keep it up!

OH MY GOD. I love this story, and the plot is unfolding quite amazingly. I sincerely hope to see more, this has been one of my favorite stories I've found on here. Please keep writing, this is the kind of stuff I live for. <3

I love the direction this story is heading. Can't wait to see what happens next :)