rate_review Reviews

Really enjoy how you keep Exit's voice throughout.

Somehow I think Topher can handle Vin.

Love how your mixing in Fran's theatre!

Will Jack meet Sam?!

Thanks!
R

NOOOOOOO!!!!! I swear if you've killed off Topher I will never read any of your stories again!!! He's my favorite character and you just can't kill him!! That would break my heart and I would literally cry my eyes out. Literally.

That twas evil. Topher needs to live!!!

You're cruel T_T poor poor Topher. Now he'll understand how Exit felt being shot.

It's always hard to remember with the way he behaves that Topher was actually raised a noble. I'd love to see more of that, because around Exit he truly behaved like the spoiled pet he was when Exit met him (which is nice also in a different way).

I almost hope Exit can get away with being with Jack and Topher both (if you don't kill Topher). Jack is nice and sweet and Exit really need him in his life to counterbalance the mindless physical relationships I think but Topher is funny and just more carefree about things and he's very good company.

Wonder where you're going with the murder and now the attempted murder (who was the real target, that's what I'm wondering now).

Oh and I love how Clearwater is mentioned regularly because it reminds me that this story has a whole universe behind it with its geography and politic and I love it so very much.

What?! Oh my god! No!!! He can't die! But was it on accident or on purpose?! Ahhh! I gotta know!

NO WAY!
LAMBY! How could you Q____________________________Q
No no no! T_T

Awww! Topher is so adorable! I just wanna hug him! Aww now I can't pick a side! Jack or Topher?! You aren't making this easy for me lol I can't wait to see Sam

Will the Captian ever come back into the story? I miss him...

Wow!! We definately couldn't do without the sex scenes, that was one steamy chapter! And im glad jack got to let off steam too! I'm reading this story covertly on my ipad in a 2 hour car ride to the Norwich coast. Talk about squirming in my seat! Thank god the iPads big enough to cover up my problem!
Thanks for clearing up quint and tophers parting, I'm still bummed about it, I liked quint so I hope he comes back somehow in this story. I agree topher gaining independence is great but i still think he needs a more forceful man than exit to keep his smart mouth in line, they seem more brotherly than loverly to me. He needs more of a challenge! he really is one of my fav characters! So i can't wait to see what you do with him.

I hope exit manages to keep hold of jack... Although hopefully jack doesnt make it easy for him!!! It cant be plain sailing for him without any consequences....But after this chapter it looks like he's gonna be fine for now....The horn dog!

Great story, will read this more thouroughly when I get home tonight, I had to skim some bits, it got to hot in the car I think I was flushing!

I really like this story and have been following this series from the beggining, I like Exit alot but... i cant believe he's getting away with his behaviour so easily! (which endears him to me most the time!!) I hope he's made to feel some remorse for how badly jacks feeling in future chapters perhaps with jack not letting him have sex... which is his one major driving force throughout the series and would effect him the most. However it seems he has already got away with it and they will be getting in the sack soon enough... at least make Exit suffer somehow... (though the sex scenes are hot) he needs to grow up a bit and it would be good to see him not so flakey.
i really do love this story though and the rest of the characters especially topher, its a shame the captain dumped him so easily i really liked the captian so i hope he see's the errors of his ways and really regrets taking on the new pet. look forward to the upcoming posts!