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for Exit Wounds

by Melsiebug

person Rosei
schedule September 27, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 33

Wow! What a great offer from Capt Quint! (The sailing offer!)))

Love that Quint still loves his former boys!

Can't wait to meet "Thingy!"

Can't believe this story is almost over! What a ride!

So many questions left!!!!! HA!

So glad there will be another story!

(To think it all started with Barney!!!!!!)

Thank you writing these adventure stories!!!!

R





person nemo
schedule September 27, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I'm so sad Vin's dead. I can't wait for the backstory on him. Also, I would totally buy anything of yours on Kindle.
person Hideandgoseek
schedule September 25, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Pleeeeaaaassse please please please please please keep jack topher and exit together!!! It would crush me if they split up! Or even if jack and topher got together and exit became a pirate again! It can't happen!!!! Please don't let it!!! Now jack becoming a pirate WITH exit I can handle and topher actually learning to sail or something but they have to stay together! Pleeeaaase!!!
schedule September 25, 2012 at 12:00 AM
There had better not be any killing off of jack or I will be horrendously sad :( :(
person Rosei
schedule September 24, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 32

LL,

I feel it Dave!

Very sad that Exit is so sad
and that Topher is unable to get
through to him. (Deftly written!)

So sad!!!!

Hurrah! For the arrival of Tallis!!!!

Double hurrah for the dinner invite!!!!!

Thank you!
R




person Avelynn
schedule September 23, 2012 at 12:00 AM
HELL!
Yes they do want! *Q*

Screw Jack, the Pirate is way better anyway *Q*
person Rosei
schedule September 20, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 31


So sad!!!!!

Really good portrayal of shock and grief.

So SAD!!!!!!

Glad Exit's got both Vio and Topher.

So sad!!!!!

Thank you!
R

(Would love a copy on Kindle!)
person Avelynn
schedule September 19, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Ch 31

*cries*
*snifes*
*bites you*
Roar I so hatelove you right now q.q
person Rosei
schedule September 16, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 30

OMG!

What a chapter! Tense throughout!

Oh the pain! (All the chickens have come home to roost!)

Wow! I'm stunned! You said that actions will have consequences

and they have! Finally. Fini. Fin. So sad!

Crazed Toni can get her own rubber room now.

Exciting, suspenseful and ultimately sad! Great chapter!


Thank you,
R
person Avelynn
schedule September 16, 2012 at 12:00 AM
w.... WUAAAAAAAAAAAAAAH QQ
Nooooo I liked him SO MUCH Q_Q
Thats Evil of you!
*snife*

Good I bet Exit is gonna think it's his fault q.q

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