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London! I just finished the last chapter!!! I was so sad Vin was killed. Even though he wasn't a great guy, I think he really loved Exit. And of course he even told Vio if he had met Exit before Toni he would never have married her. So, so sad. Of course Exit thinks it's all his fault.

I'm glad Jack took off to go on the Surosian adventure with his b/f's. I just hope he doesn't wind up getting in too much trouble.

I'm so excited there's another book that you wrote! I could literally read about Exit forever. I absolutely LOVE all these stories and I never thought I would! I'm so boring, I usually never venture past the usual every day "normal" stories, no supernatural, paranormal, mages, elfs, magic, were-creatures, vampires, etc. And certainly no boys with tails, blue boys, and lizards. lol But I enjoyed this story so much and I'm so glad I continued with it. I think I told you after I started reading "The Boy with the Golden Eyes" (the first story I read in this series), I wasn't going to continue b/c it did have these other types of people in it, but I think by that time I was already in love with Jack and Exit. lol

The other site that I read/edit on is having their annual Reader's Choice Awards and they have a category for non-GA stories. (GA is the website). Anyway, I'm nominating the last Exit story (b/c it has to be written in 2013). Your stories are so creative and imaginative and just fantastic!

I can't wait to start on the last one. Although I'm so sad it will be the last one. :( I'm going to bookmark it now so it'll be handy for me. That's what I did with this story; I have it bookmarked in my favorites on the computer and on my phone. :)

London!!! I just finished with chapter twenty-seven! So, Ry is the Alexander Graham Bell of his 'universe'. lol I never realized that they didn't have phones! lol In fact, I remember thinking when Jack went to Municipal Works looking for Exit and the girl behind the desk sent a message up to the fourteenth floor, I was like, why doesn't she just pick up the phone and call up there? lol Duh! B/c they didn't know what phones were! Imagine how helpful it would have been if Exit had a cell phone every time he got in trouble? lol

I am totally enjoying this story, London! I don't want it to end! I love the way you wrote the relationship between Exit, Jack, and Topher. Topher is really falling for Jack, eh? I hope Exit doesn't get jealous. That's a big problem w/those types of relationships. I'm not sure what they're called. I have a really good online friend from Germany who was in a relationship like that until the third person (the one who joined my friend and his longtime b/f), up and accepted a job offer back in the states (where he's originally from). They were both heartbroken and understandably so. I just know I couldn't do it. I'm way too jealous a person and too insecure. I'd always be thinking that the other two loved each other more than me and I know it just wouldn't work. Hopefully it'll work with these three. :)

Ok, on to the next chapter! I'm so excited knowing that I have a whole other Exit story to read after! :) :)

London!!!! How are you????? Long time no hear! Probably my bad! I'm so bad at writing people back.

I just started up with this story again. I had read quite a few chapters quite awhile ago and then just stopped for some stupid reason. I reread everything again yesterday and now I'm on chapter sixteen where Exit is going off with that lady stalker and some guy who seems familiar to him.

I was screaming at the computer screen for Exit not to be so fucking STUPID!!!! I wanted to smack him upside his head! Thank God they stopped off at his flat and he told Topher where he was going. I think he's going to need rescuing sooner rather than later. lol

It's funny, I'm thrown right back into all his craziness! lol I absolutely LOVE all of these Exit stories!

Anyway...on to chapter seventeen!

This was absolutely lovely! I do love a good threesome, and I definitely wasn't expecting it to end up in a threesome when I started reading these books, but boy am I glad it did! I love the way the plot has been twisting and turning, and how each book is like its own story, but still interweaves into the full story. When I first started reading I was going to say that maybe you should look into run-on sentences and how to avoid them, because your writing is very good, but tends to have some run-ons and misused punctuation. However, it seems to have gotten better in the latest book, so I'm not sure that has anything to do with it anymore. I look forward to reading the next installment whenever that happens, and am definitely going to add you to my recommended reading list!

Do you have an email list for when things update? Because I'd love to be included on that list. (I'm not sure if I've said that before, or not).

<3

Glad there is going to be a 4TH part! I really like these characters and the story lines so far. Trying to think of a new title and came up with "Exit to Eden". Just a thought :-)

I started reading the first exit story and didn't stop till I had finished this one. I love this series and can't wait to read the final book.

Chapter 34

LL,


Love all the fighting for the towel

and it ending up being brought upstairs!

Great set up for the next adventure!

You're promising more pirates so

I CAN'T WAIT!

More of everything I love!!!!!

Congrats on the move to self-pub! I'm in!

Thank you!
R

Ok so your last note just hit me, I've literally been following this story since the first few chapters of exit stargedy but I'm a bad person do I've never reviewed. :0 So firstly let me just say I love youu so much these stories literally make my wedensday and Sunday ! And I nearly cried when vin died because he was a dick but he was a suave dick. Don't get me started on how much I love exit jack and topher blahhh a-maz-ingg . And I kinda wanted you to make Quinn (sexy bastard ) and exit sleep together but I understand why you didn't.
So thank you for the great stories and I can't wait till the next one xxxxxxx

*squeals and makes lots of funny noises* THE ENDING IS EXACTLY WHAT I WANTED TO HAPPEN!!!! Are they gonna join the pirates? You're not gonna give us any hints are you? I can't wait to see it on kindle! I will buy it if I have the money!!! Again, It was spectacular, as usual!

Yyyaaaahhooooooooooo!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Jack the bad boy is very yummy :) soo excited for the next story <3<3<3