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for White Beauty

by praiseofblood

person Anonymous
schedule November 16, 2016 at 12:00 AM

Argh! I hate reading incomplete stories that have been abandoned.

person icassop
schedule April 1, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I just discovered this story and it's great!
The characters are intriguing, the plot is mysterious and engaging and overall well written.
I hope very much that you will continue this story. Until then I can only hope and wait patiently...
person Maya
schedule December 28, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Please, what happens next?
person wolfseyes2700
schedule November 20, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story. Amer is very interesting character along with his master. I'd really like to see how things develop between them as the story progresses.
person poppyhigh
schedule May 29, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Really happy to see this story updated !!! I love this Amer too much which it's bit long time to read them which right now this new chapter made me want more and more. So I do hope that you will update the next chapter soon. Always support you.
person midnightsscream
schedule May 29, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I'm not sure what really went on it this chapter, but...YAY Amer isn't stuck on the balcony anymore. great job!
schedule May 28, 2013 at 12:00 AM
:o i love this story. please update soon!
schedule May 28, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Wow. More please. Please don't let us wait too long. I really love this story.
schedule May 28, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Yay! Another update so soon. Thank you. :)

Jolan's verbal abuse towards Amer was rather shocking. I thought he was okay with Amer, but it seems he kind of hates him. Is he jealous because he wants to be Gita's lover? Anyways, I can't wait to find out what's really going on.
schedule May 26, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Omg! Finally! I have been waiting for the next chapter for so long. I'm glad that you updated. I love this story a lot. Anyways I hope Gita comes back soon! His brother is terrifying and poor Amer has a lot on his plate.