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for First Scene

by asexualfriend

person Quill
schedule August 17, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Wow. Not only am I speechless but I find this too sexy for words. Holy shit this was hot! Someone get me a fan!! And a hearty round of applause to your writing skills! This is an experiment, you say. Well let me be the first congratulate you on it's success!! The character POV was so defined and well written I swear I jizzed!! Just amazing!!! I would love to read more of your work. I would appreciate it if you could email me if you post anything else.

Quill
schedule June 21, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Excellent Story, looking forward to more.

The first person viewpoint I liked, you don't see too many well-written stories from that angle.