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by alinnapuomi

person Karen reader1962
schedule July 21, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Hi I like the title and the story and would prefer it to stay under the same one.
And I am glad you were able to change whatever so logging in is not required before reveiwing. : )
person js
schedule July 21, 2012 at 12:00 AM
No preference for me...great story by the way.
schedule July 14, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Haha, I read your closing notes. Much smut to come. At the pace Joonas is going, it'll be next summer before they even get to second base. lol :)

I do agree w/Joonas that he has to learn to stand on his own two feet and figure out how to navigate his world. He has to figure out how to deal with his panic attacks (since he doesn't do the medicine route) w/o kissing people. There's gotta be another way. lol After all, he may not have Sem with him all the time. =)

The whole email from the secretary was funny. She could answer her own email telling herself she sounded like a bitch. lol And the secretary is in the basement; how inconvenient is that? hahah
person Karen
schedule July 14, 2012 at 12:00 AM
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schedule July 7, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Joonas better keep an eye on that creepy guy at work. Don't go into the bathroom alone Joonas! lol

I hope Joonas finally comes clean to Sem and tells him everything. He can't help Joonas completely until he knows everything.

And yes, I do think Sem is enjoying the way he has to "help" Joonas! lol

Have a good weekend Alinna! :)
schedule June 30, 2012 at 12:00 AM
This was a cute chapter. I get the feeling Sem is kissing Joonas more b/c he wants to, but using the excuse that he's doing it for Joonas. Did that even make sense? lol
schedule June 23, 2012 at 12:00 AM
OK so i dont really review but i do like the story :)
schedule June 23, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Yes, Sem is definitely special. And even the good doc thought they were together. lol

And now Sem said it was ok for Joonas to have his dog and cat there! In his beautiful apartment! Omg, he doesn't know what he said yes to! I think the first few days the dog is gonna be nervous and just pee and w/e in the apt.! But it will be good for Joonas to have his pets close. He must miss them. How come he never talked about them before?

Anyway, great chapter!

Hey, don't take it personally that people aren't r&r-ing. There are even authors out there that read and don't review. Just be happy your reader count is up! :)
schedule June 23, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Hey alinna! You got two of us now! Reader and I! :)
schedule June 17, 2012 at 12:00 AM
"Some people need to come with a manual." Hahha, that line was so funny and actually so true. I coulda used a manual for my soon-to-be-ex and my youngest. I certainly need a manual for him! lol

I can certainly see where Joonas would be wary of being on different meds and trying different doses, etc. But who's to say that the first meds he tries wouldn't work? And in the end, learning how to combat these attacks, or catching them before they become full-fledged attacks is what he needs. So wouldn't it be better to do the trial and error with the meds if in the end they can control his attacks? If it were me, I wouldn't want to live like he's living. When he's having an attack, he's a danger to himself and to others.

Oh, I have an idea: since kissing seems to calm him down a bit, what would full fledged screwing do? I would think that would totally relax him for awhile! lol Just sayin'.....maybe he should be a male escort, lol, maybe get rid of his panic attacks forever! hahaah :)

On a more serious note: Sem is an angel. He is so lucky to have him for a boss, I'll tell you. Who else would put up with this? He's so nice, kind and compassionate. AND HE'S WILLING TO HELP JOONAS IN ANY WAY HE CAN!!! And he kisses really well; how can you pass that up? lol

Great chapter as always! I eagerly await the next one! :)