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This was just so so so cute.
Sem has already fallen in love with Joonas, how can he still go on a date with somebody else?
Wouldn't he rather stay at home and cuddle J?

As for the forum, I have never used it before but would be willing to register and give my opinion if needed;)

YOU'VE NEVER BEEN DRUNK BEFORE????? lol Lucky girl! I remember in college freshman year, never drank before in my life, hugging the toilet bowl in agony. lol After that they called me Lisa the Lush. Of course my drunk periods were few and far between, but you certainly did it justice! :)

Poor Joonas. Sem is sending him so many mixed signals. Is it Joonas himself that Sem misses in his bed, or is it just a body? Meaning, if he goes on this date on Friday and they seem to hit it off, would he bring her back to his apartment? Would he be happy with HER in his bed or is it really Joonas he wants? And why the hell couldn't Sem have guided Joonas to the bedroom instead of being so cramped together like that?

Oh, and another thing I thought of when I was reading the yummy kissing part. lol The way I read the kiss, it was pretty passionate. Couldn't Joonas tell how Sem thought of him through the kiss? I've read that a lot; how the characters can feel the other's emotions thru their kiss. Just wondering.

As always alinna, looking forward to the next chapter! :)

Oh, and I don't think you have to sign into the forums to read the author's reviewer comments. I do that with a few stories and I never have to log in there.

Well out of everything I thought this would be this wasn't it, but in a REALLY good way lol Your summery is a bit erm-vauge? Misleading? Open for misinterpretation..?! But it's still spot on too so uh don't mind me hehe ^____^;
This really is a lovely read, I love the character interaction and am glad to see more characters showing up! Glittery shoes-pfft! And now a date, which almost makes Sem out to be umm well, a bit misleading? Almost? And what about the pets? where did they go? I keep wating to see them lol XD And what happend to "watch me pee then offer me a brownie" guy? Has he moved on to greener pastures?
Love this story, sorry for the third degree but there all thigs I wanna know! Which means it's good! :D Congnative processing and all that ha, well until a less awkward next time!

Noooo! Sem must not date anybody who is not Joonas. God dammit, and Joonas was making so much progress with the boss too.
Sem dating somebody else is going to be the death of him.

You got me all emotional over this chapter. I realized that I really, really wanted to see the two of our main characters get together.
Ugh, it seems that the dating crisis has already made Joonas aware of the depth of his feelings towards Sem. Now he must act on them. Actually, I have wondered what it is that hinders Joonas in confessing. Is it that he considers himself too unworthy of Sem? Is he afraid that if they hook up Sem is bound to leave him eventually? Therefore, he wouldn't be able to pick himself up from the imminent break up, and probably would have to change his job.

Jeez, I am kind of(scratch it very) angry at Sem, too. Simply looking at Joonas' behaviour he should be able to tell what is going on. They kiss, sleep in the same bed and he is like: "Oh, I'm having a date Friday night but it is still ok for us to sleep together and kiss. Nothing has to change. I am not going to leave you." This. Is. Bullshit. Him dating changes EVERYTHING. Because he cares for Joonas and Joonas cares for him and not in the purely family/friends caring way either. He knew what he was getting into when he started kissing Joonas. He got him attached to himself and now Joonas can't even breathe without him.

I understand that he gave Joonas the chance to step forward and confess without the risk of being rejected. Had J. been a normal person it would have been more than enough but J. is anything but a normal person and Sem knows it. I had this feeling that Joonas was slowly coming around, starting to trust Sem and opening up to him. I believe that in time he could have been coaxed out of his shell also in the relationship area. But Sem decided not to wait for him and it got me sooo angry that I had to write up this ginormous rant and disguise it as a review. Sorry for that.

Anyways, thank you for this story, I love it and look forward to reading new chapter.

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Man, I had to laugh when reading about poor Joonas and his hangover. lol Been there, done that! :(

I really like Walker. I think he could be a good friend to Joonas. I have a feeling Joonas will need someone to turn to on Friday night. You wrote Joonas' feelings about Sem's date so perfectly, I felt like it was happening to me. The jealousy, the fear that Sem will find someone and leave Joonas out in the cold, all alone. It's such a scary feeling. Especially for Joonas b/c he has so many issues. I mean really, who else is gonna kiss away his anxiety? lol I don't think that will go over too well on his date. haha

Maybe Walker can be that person? Just sayin'.....but honestly, I think Joonas' feelings for Sem run deeper than even he's aware of.

Great chapter alinna! Looking forward to the one tomorrow! :)

“Oh no, Walker, I don't sleep on the sofa at all!” Ha Ha. I totally love Joonas. Can't wait for more updates :)

I don't know where I was that I didn't see you wrote a chapter nine! lol Unless you posted two chapters in one day?

This was a very comical chapter: social shoe shopping and getting smashed out of our faces. That was funny! But I thought the purpose of the meeting was to discuss work related items not to schedule dinners at co-worker's places. lol

Ok, on to the next chapter.

Oh, btw: I really like Walker! Maybe he'll be some competition for Sem?

Well Joo-Joo certainly can't hold his liquor. lol

And what a hangover he's gonna have in the a.m. :)