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by alinnapuomi

person eroburn
schedule August 25, 2012 at 12:00 AM
man i'm back to cringing.
if i was joonas...

i would have let the door
hit Sam where the sun doesn't shine.
Once a cheater always a cheater.
And Sem....
And that confusing friend kiss with will.(think his name is will)
ug i don't even know. *CRINGE*

scratch lol

On another note i think some woman
made up the kid rumor.
Unless he really did have a kid
then he wouldn't be in any shape
to raise it.
schedule August 25, 2012 at 12:00 AM
My match-making mind is already at work matching up Sam with Walker. lol But no, I really, really like Walker and I want Joonas to be with him, as well as Sem. But Sem seems more interested in just caring for Joonas and not feeling too emotional with him. Even though he does send out mixed signals. And he's jealous of Walker. Now he can be jealous of Sam.

Sam, he sounds like he turned over a new leaf, but one never knows. Is it an act? Is he sincere? I can see Joonas falling for him all over again. Which of course would be bad since he does have feelings for Sem. And maybe Walker. Hmmmm, you really threw a wrench in this one alinna! lol

And Sem, Sam, only one letter separates them. hehe
person jaskolka
schedule August 18, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Muahahahaha! In your face Sem. This is what you get for dilly-dallying with women wearing red dresses. Serves you right. Muahahah...
...
(went to take her meds)
...
(took her meds and is back more sane now)

Anyways, putting Sem's obvious jelousy aside, I liked the way Joonas handled the Walker situation. He was level-headed and reasonable, trying to be upfront with all parties involved (Sem, Walker, himself). I wonder how this situation is going to develop since from the previous chapters it seemed that Joonas was already pretty much in love with Sem. Will it be possible for him to switch to Walker? Actually, I think that it would be great to see Joonas trying living on his own. As he himself said, it is difficult to differentiate between the attachment caused by Sem's taking care of him due to Joonas' condition and possible romantic feelings.

Also, I have a feeling that the brownie pervert is bound to cause some kind of crisis sooner or later. Oh, drama, here we come!

schedule August 18, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Hahah, alinna, you always make me laugh! :) No worries, you can just explain the condom issue w/"Across the Square" in an A/N in the next chapter! I'll have to be patient and wait. lol

I LOVE Walker! Can you make a straight clone of him? And send him to the states? lol I'll send you my address!

I see that Sem is very jealous of Walker. And Walker of Sem. Hmmmmm, I just got an idea. It's pretty dirty. Like in the way of Patrick/Issac/Jerry dirty. lol Walker and Sem both want Joonas. But Sem is masking it with the "helping you out with your anxiety attacks" route, while Walker is straight (no pun intended, lol) out there in your face, "I want to be more than friends". It's definitely a tough decision for Joonas. He did handle it very well with both of them, especially Sem, who he pretty much admitted that since Sem is so good as dispelling his panic attacks, his feelings for Sem may be a bit skewered. Oh, I also loved that Joonas wanted to say goodbye to Walker (not sure if he would have done that in the past. After all, it's a socially acceptable thing to say goodbye to someone, lol.) I'm glad Joonas explained to Walker that he does love talking with him and that should hold Walker over until they speak again.

This was a terrific chapter alinna! Can't wait until the next one! :) Now I'm off to read your porn one-shot! hahah :)
person eroburn
schedule August 18, 2012 at 12:00 AM
not really.
i want him to be happy
Sem seems to be..
unsure of his attentions..
and unwilling to even
wait a little for Joonas.
Sem might even have had him
if he hadn't dated that woman.
But who knows.
And Sem stringing the woman
along, when he is kissing Joonas...
Cheater cheater pumpkin eater,
maybe not cheating on them per say,
but on his feelings for sure.
person reader1962
schedule August 18, 2012 at 12:00 AM
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person reader1962
schedule August 18, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Joonas had has a kid?
person jaskolka
schedule August 11, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I am exasperated with Sem.

He comes back home from his date.
Gets attacked by a desperate Joonas.
Eagerly makes out with Joonas.
(At this point I thought that there would be no second date with Lady in Red)
Then, while snuggling with J. talks about meeting the woman again asking if its ok...
After a while J. has an anxiety attack and refuses to explain what it was all about.
They end up in bed together with Sem outright saying that he is open to sex with J.

WTF?

How dense can you get?
It is not fair to the lady. It is not fair to Joonas.
What the f*ck does Sem think he is doing here???

I am so angry again.
Honestly, right now I just want Joonas to get it on with Walker or whoever else would be right for him and kick Sem to the curb.
I just don't want to watch him suffer anymore.

P.S. Congratulations on your enlightement with further parts of this story.
person eroburn
schedule August 11, 2012 at 12:00 AM
ya on one hand i like this.
on the another every time Sem talks about dating someone else I cringe.
update soon :)
schedule August 11, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I am a pet lover, so I was thrilled that Joonas was finally reunited with his beloved pets! But seriously, Mighty Pug and Kitty? Could he get any more original? lol And it is the funniest thing seeing a cat curled up in a sink! One of my cats does that all the time; it's so cute! :) So when is Joonas gonna walk poor Mighty Pug?

So this woman Sem is seeing again is divorced, I'm assuming. And she has a five year old. It will be odd for Sem, but really it's not odd meeting a woman online who has kids. I think he'll find the more he checks online, the more divorced women with kids he'll meet. Just sayin'...

I loved when Joonas admitted to falling in love with Sem's mouth. Of course we know he's just in love with Sem period.

Though I didn't like it when Sem said even if Joonas is living in a different country, he can always call or write him. I guess I didn't want him to sound so nonchalant about Joonas not being around. He sounded like he didn't care if Joonas was off somewhere else.

Anyway...another great chapter! Love the kisses! Oh, and Sem WANTS Joonas to venture into his pants, lol! That was funny! But then is he sending out mixed signals? He wants to see this woman again yet he wants to kiss Joonas and he wants Joonas to feel him up. Hmmmm.