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for My Lover, Not My Love

by onamadfreakingtrip

person meg
schedule August 13, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Love it
schedule August 13, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Hurray for the update!!! I think Val's point of view was fine in this chapter. But if you have trouble doing his point of view, why not change back to Myle? Anyways, I look forward to more!
schedule June 8, 2013 at 12:00 AM
haha, I'm glad the story is back on!! It was like witnessing the same conversation on the other side!
person kylee
schedule June 6, 2013 at 12:00 AM
This is so funny. I love this story and I think about it all the time. I forgot the story title so I haven't read an update in a long time. I am so happy that you are still working on it. Keep up the good work.
schedule May 10, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Hummmm. I like this story but not sure about Val. I need a little more insight in to his character before I can say if I like him or not. I like Myle. But his nickname should be Angst City. LOL. I really don't anything else bad to happen to him. He's been through enough. Anyway update please?
schedule May 5, 2013 at 12:00 AM
well, because I read your other story, I can guess what happened with his childhood. And omg I am so happy with the update! Please post more! I love both these characters!
schedule April 27, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Oh god that was so hot! But seriously, Val needs to back off a bit. He's being way to scary. I can even expect him to just put Myle in a cage in his apartment..or chain him to the bed or something. He is just that possessive. And I am very worried about his possible "mob" enemies when they find out about his little obsession. I look forward to what happens when Myle wakes up!
schedule April 27, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Despite Myle's irritation and annoyance with Val, I think he's really starting to enjoy being with Val. True, Val is domineering and controlling (obviously, he wants Myle to be 'his'), but deep down Myle may want that. He may feel safe having somebody taking care of him.

And of course Val is falling quickly for Myle.

Great chapter! Glad you're back. :)
person kylee123
schedule July 12, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I was thinking about this story and hoping we would see another chapter and here it is. Poor Myle is so messed up. He has three thousand dollars in his apartment and he is still selling himself. He probably feels that he is managing the situation but he is really unable to protect himself.
schedule July 11, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Is this normal for you? Hahah, that's pretty funny!

Poor Myle; getting accosted by the grocery boy. But seriously, that kid was willing to do permanent damage to Myle's head and RAPE him????? That kid is a sicko.

Hope Myle's head will be ok. He's actually lucky Val had his people check up on him.

Great chapter ....freakingtrip! :) Wish I was on a mad freaking trip. :(