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Ok, this ending seems so out of character for Shawn. What happened to "I'll do anything for you. I'm always here for you"? What happened to that? So the first sign that Marshall has to act like a grown-up and take care of his sister, Shawn has a temper tantrum? This doesn't make sense. Shawn should realize that child services probably wouldn't let a fourteen year old live there. I'm not sure, but it just seems like they would really interview them and make sure it's a stable home environment.

Marshall could try. But either way, Shawn acted like a spoiled brat. He should be ashamed of himself. Marshall just lost his mother for Christ's sakes! Ok, so she was a horrible mother, but she left her fourteen year old daughter all alone. Marshall is just being a mature older brother, looking out for her.

I'll never forgive Shawn now since he broke Marshall's heart. Marshall trusted him. He better find him and apologize. Marshall is too proud to go running back to him. What the hell is he thinking?

Loving it, holding out for the next chapter

I love the crossover w/Myle and Marshall!

It was sad hearing about Marshall's mom's death. It's too bad she died that way. And why was she in Marshall's apartment, and in his room?

Also, Marshall went to his apt. to grab stuff to bring to Shawn's to start moving in. Then he found his mom dead. But he told Myle that he moved in with Shawn a month ago. Why did he wait a month or more(if it took longer for him to move in) to bury his mother?

And....where was Shawn? He should have been there to support Marhsall.

Well, your loyal and faithful reviewer here. lol Thanks for the shout-out onamadfreakingtrip! :) You write, I'll r&r!

I didn't notice any typos at all.

I'm so happy Marshall found Shawn. In the beginning I was wary of Shawn b/c he seemed to take and take and it didn't seem like Marhsall wanted that.

Marshall has been thru so much and his family is so fucked up and his mother went beserk (that's the only explanation I have for her blaming her son for things AN ADULT DID TO HIM! That adult being HER BROTHER....) Let that sink in to her pea brain.

Good chapter, as always! Shawn is quite the lifesaver. Happy 4th! :)

Awww, that was sweet at the end. Shawn didn't realize how messed up Marshall is b/c of his home life. Good chapter.

For some reason I don't remember reading this chapter. And I know I would have remembered reading it. Marshall's 'mother' is a wacko who deserves to be put away. Omg, what a Looney Tunes!

Well that was sweet of Shawn. Usually he's pretty gruff w/Marshall. Poor Marshall; his uncle abused him and his mother blamed him b/c her sister found out what her husband was doing. And his dad dying; that was his fault how???? It seems his mother has major issues. She really needs help.

I think Aaron and Fredrickson both took advantage of a young boy. And Fredrickson was worse b/c his abuse continued and he even recorded it. They're both pedophiles. :(