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March 12, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Def. felt the warmth :) I liked it a whole bunch ^^ I'm looking forward to the next chapter and yay! Ethan's seeming to have warmed and opened up^^ now maybe Cassie can let her guard down to the idea of having something closer with her two besties and especially with Ethan. :) cause I think she was scared of not having her feelings be returned too even though she tried to hide it as something that she thought might not have been possible; -hugs Seth- if only we girls had more guys like him loll :)
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March 12, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I adore this story and CAN'T WAIT to read more! SO hot! My favorite line is when Ethan says he is going to burn her romance novels. You have such a great mix of humor and enticing sexual tension. I have read through all the chapters you have posted three times. Please give me more to enjoy!
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March 12, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Ch 5
I made myself stop reading late last night the I find out uploaded another chapter! Yay! I still am on the fence about Seth then him suggesting Ethan to go down on Cassie when they are both virgins while he watches if so creepy. He acts like he's helping and maybe I am jaded and way off base but I have this nagging feeling he's doing all this to create a wedge between Ethan & Cassie. At least Cass got an orgasm out of him. Did I me toon that the oral scene was HOT because it was.
I made myself stop reading late last night the I find out uploaded another chapter! Yay! I still am on the fence about Seth then him suggesting Ethan to go down on Cassie when they are both virgins while he watches if so creepy. He acts like he's helping and maybe I am jaded and way off base but I have this nagging feeling he's doing all this to create a wedge between Ethan & Cassie. At least Cass got an orgasm out of him. Did I me toon that the oral scene was HOT because it was.
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March 12, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Ch 6
This is one of my new addictions I really had to make myself not read all the chapters at once and I’ll tell you it was not easy! Since I’m caught up now I may have to take a look at your other stories to feed my habit.
I considered your words very seriously concerning Seth, and I from here on reading him with an open mind (I might just be so used to reading stories of betrayal that I was waiting for the shoe to drop). And I felt like a jerk pointing out your possible miss speak with 1st & 3rd persons but I want it to be as perfect as it can be.
I love the sweetness that Ethan showed Cassie calming her and caressing her, it makes you forget that he’s never been with a woman they are very natural with each other. And way to go Ethan giving a black-out induced orgasm! I’m really trying to like Seth sincerely I am, but he’s so bossy. He says and acts like he’s constructing all this for Ethan’s benefit therefor by Cassie as well; I want that to be true. But now I fear for Cassie what if she falls in love with the sex she had with Ethan. What I need to do is shut off my brain and enjoy the pure carnage but that’s the thing this story isn’t just sex there’s relationships and feeling so intertwined with this story.
I can’t wait for ch 7, 8, 9, 10, 37
You know you love me, XOXO
This is one of my new addictions I really had to make myself not read all the chapters at once and I’ll tell you it was not easy! Since I’m caught up now I may have to take a look at your other stories to feed my habit.
I considered your words very seriously concerning Seth, and I from here on reading him with an open mind (I might just be so used to reading stories of betrayal that I was waiting for the shoe to drop). And I felt like a jerk pointing out your possible miss speak with 1st & 3rd persons but I want it to be as perfect as it can be.
I love the sweetness that Ethan showed Cassie calming her and caressing her, it makes you forget that he’s never been with a woman they are very natural with each other. And way to go Ethan giving a black-out induced orgasm! I’m really trying to like Seth sincerely I am, but he’s so bossy. He says and acts like he’s constructing all this for Ethan’s benefit therefor by Cassie as well; I want that to be true. But now I fear for Cassie what if she falls in love with the sex she had with Ethan. What I need to do is shut off my brain and enjoy the pure carnage but that’s the thing this story isn’t just sex there’s relationships and feeling so intertwined with this story.
I can’t wait for ch 7, 8, 9, 10, 37
You know you love me, XOXO
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March 11, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Ooo, I can't wait to read the rest of this! It's rare to see literature done on mfm in a way that makes me tingle. Off to read the rest :)
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March 11, 2013 at 12:00 AM
This was very hot :) I like the chemistry and the bond that they have with each other; it's very sweet and special.
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March 11, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I vote for continuing the story but since I've seen there are 5 chapters I'm pretty sure my vote wasn't needed but I still like to share. This has a cute premises I too have a gay bestie and wonder what sex would be like with him. Onward to ch 2. Can't wait to meet Seth. Oh and another vote Ethan de-virginize her.
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March 11, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Ch 2
Sorry I can't say I noticed any glaring mistakes or continuity issues. I love these three you really get a sense they've all be friends a while and the funny banter is great I am loving Seth maybe he can get his own spin-off? She is a brave girl jumping into the deep end straight away. And please tell me we will find out what Seth whispered to Ethan to get him all hard and bothered!!!!!
Sorry I can't say I noticed any glaring mistakes or continuity issues. I love these three you really get a sense they've all be friends a while and the funny banter is great I am loving Seth maybe he can get his own spin-off? She is a brave girl jumping into the deep end straight away. And please tell me we will find out what Seth whispered to Ethan to get him all hard and bothered!!!!!
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March 11, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Ch 3
My only criticism is you seemed to slip from 1st person narration: " I wasn't as ready as I thought I was. They would understand if she asked to stop." If I'm mistake I apologizes. Now Seth actually trying to be helpful/self serving or trying to cause drama suggesting they all be one fuck buddies? I mean it's a lot to expect for Cassie to be losing her virginity w/ someone watching never mind making future hook up plans? I thought I liked Seth but now I'm not so sure and good for Cass to stop when she felt uncomfortable and Ethan being the great friend to not make her ask a second time.
My only criticism is you seemed to slip from 1st person narration: " I wasn't as ready as I thought I was. They would understand if she asked to stop." If I'm mistake I apologizes. Now Seth actually trying to be helpful/self serving or trying to cause drama suggesting they all be one fuck buddies? I mean it's a lot to expect for Cassie to be losing her virginity w/ someone watching never mind making future hook up plans? I thought I liked Seth but now I'm not so sure and good for Cass to stop when she felt uncomfortable and Ethan being the great friend to not make her ask a second time.
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March 11, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Ch 4
You said in you AN you hoped this ch would less awkward, but I think the previous ch awkward was perfect, she's a virgin he's gay the pleads for awkwardness. And I am still on the fence about Seth this ch didn't solidify my suspicions but it didn't ease them either. I think I'm more anxious than Cassie to see what comes next. I hope you keep up the storytelling this one is fun well it's after midnight closer to 1 so ch 5 will have to wait.
You said in you AN you hoped this ch would less awkward, but I think the previous ch awkward was perfect, she's a virgin he's gay the pleads for awkwardness. And I am still on the fence about Seth this ch didn't solidify my suspicions but it didn't ease them either. I think I'm more anxious than Cassie to see what comes next. I hope you keep up the storytelling this one is fun well it's after midnight closer to 1 so ch 5 will have to wait.