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hey i didnt get ur message, but i sent one idk if the forum is glitching or something

Good story. Keep going :)

nice story! i really like it :) i like the character development you put into Eli, thoulg i dont think we got any kind of physical description of him. id love to beta your story, if you want me to send me a pm on the forum,
i dont know if you joined it yet, its easy to join but takes like a day for your account to be accepted. anyways let me know if you're interested :)

I love this story. Cocoa and Eli are great characters and I would love if you continue this story.

Please update soon!