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for The Burn

by peachlikeprince

schedule May 17, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Really interesting beginning-can't wait til the next chapter!
schedule May 16, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I'm really interested in this story. I hope they're not too harsh on him for saving their lives! I'll be looking forward to an update!
schedule May 16, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Enjoyed the first chapter, especially the interval where we had a glimpse of Ilya's past; how he began work at LAMB (nice bridge).

COMA seems cool. Hope to read about how they interacted over the year and a half following their initial meeting. And if their relationship changed during that period, prompting Ilya to save him.

Look forward to more soon.
person Kria
schedule May 16, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Very intriguing beginning :) and very original! Can't wait to read more ^^
person thu11392
schedule May 16, 2012 at 12:00 AM
very promising! i like it =]
person Outlaw
schedule May 15, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I fell absolutely in love with just the first chapter! Beautifully written.
I can't wait till the next installment. Well done!
person Anise
schedule May 15, 2012 at 12:00 AM
(1) I wasn't sure what to expect since there's not much in the way of superheroes on AFF so I don't normally read it but I loved the start, it was rather exciting :) Ilya was adorable I found him rather charming, in a pushy blunt kind of way ;) It's a wonderful start, I'm looking forward to more ^_^