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May 31, 2012 at 12:00 AM
In the chapter or previous one Ilya mentions that his bodyguard was untraceable and that maybe the chip was destroyed - how does he know that? Ilya doesn't have any technology to look that stuff up, does he?
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May 30, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Great update!
Getting to know Coma a little more and the more scenes/moments he has, the more I like him.
Favourite part was when Coma called him Ilya (at his request), and then promptly told to ‘shut-up’ when he obliged. Such a snippy little thing Ilya - would not have him any other way.
Trapped together with all eyes watching and now the kiss should make for some very interesting reading. Wonder if Ilya will now cause more chaos because of the kiss he instigated, and with is temperament he might just blame Coma. :- )
Hope he can work out what they want soon, does not seem as if his captor will be very lenient if he does not have some information of significance for him.
Well done!
Getting to know Coma a little more and the more scenes/moments he has, the more I like him.
Favourite part was when Coma called him Ilya (at his request), and then promptly told to ‘shut-up’ when he obliged. Such a snippy little thing Ilya - would not have him any other way.
Trapped together with all eyes watching and now the kiss should make for some very interesting reading. Wonder if Ilya will now cause more chaos because of the kiss he instigated, and with is temperament he might just blame Coma. :- )
Hope he can work out what they want soon, does not seem as if his captor will be very lenient if he does not have some information of significance for him.
Well done!
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May 29, 2012 at 12:00 AM
looking forward to the next chapter! this story just gets better and better i tell ya. =]
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May 29, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Great story!!!
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May 28, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I really like this it's a very interseting take I find it fascanting that the hero's are the ones responsible for the fuck up at the lab but the Dr. still blames himself for their deaths.
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May 27, 2012 at 12:00 AM
indeed. what happened to that body guard... industrial espionage?
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May 23, 2012 at 12:00 AM
(2) I'm glad somebody asked about Li he may not have been around long but he didn't seem like such a bad guy, can't wait to see what happened to him and if he'll be helpful.
As for Ilya he is one feisty little bugger which is probably why I like him so much :) When I started reading I thought he was going to be that stereotypical shy stuttering brainiac - most definitely not.^^ His fiery temper works great up against Coma's calm and cool, how they're going to survive twenty-eight days without killing each other is definitely going to make for an entertaining read ^_^
Also I checked out your tumblr and saw your collages, I especially loved Ilya, the hair and wardrobe was just perfect :) Plus if that's Coma he's even hotter than I imagined^^ This is definitely a fun read, I can't wait for that next chapter ^_^
As for Ilya he is one feisty little bugger which is probably why I like him so much :) When I started reading I thought he was going to be that stereotypical shy stuttering brainiac - most definitely not.^^ His fiery temper works great up against Coma's calm and cool, how they're going to survive twenty-eight days without killing each other is definitely going to make for an entertaining read ^_^
Also I checked out your tumblr and saw your collages, I especially loved Ilya, the hair and wardrobe was just perfect :) Plus if that's Coma he's even hotter than I imagined^^ This is definitely a fun read, I can't wait for that next chapter ^_^
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May 23, 2012 at 12:00 AM
yah, tension and the good kind;)
update sonn!
update sonn!
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May 23, 2012 at 12:00 AM
All I can say is the name Wild Card is very cool.
Our young researcher is not such a pushover after all. Enjoyed reading the character shake up from the preconceived idea of the usual lab researcher: mostly INTJ’s, focused, avoid confrontation, and would rather spend time with a test tube than YouTube. Great how you turned that perception on its head! Favourite line amongst many:
“Fuck you. Fuck you so fucking hard...”
Love this character!
Interesting how he was asking after Coma specifically when he entered the room - hmmm.
Two very different personas in Coma and Ilya, with both at the opposite ends of the personality spectrum - but that is where we have fun with their characters.
Definitely feel for Ilya, and understand that he is angry about his lost work. Hope he can find a way to continue and I am sure Coma will assist (somehow).
Cracking job - cannot wait for an update!
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May 22, 2012 at 12:00 AM
wahhh so excited for the next chapterrr =]. keep up the awesome work!