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July 24, 2012 at 12:00 AM
oh man. exciting. this just keeps getting more mysterious.
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July 24, 2012 at 12:00 AM
ahh!!! I love this story =]] Great job!
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July 24, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I'm sure dear Benry made it out alive. It's crazy how LAMB is using Linto get Ilya to make a cure... And for what? Is the burn actually a metahuman disease created by LAMB to control the metahuman population?
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July 14, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Love this story. It's just awesome. Thank you.
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July 14, 2012 at 12:00 AM
UGH! How dare you leave on a cliffhanger?! And for 2 weeks too!!!! You're gonna kill me. You really will. No, I'm totally dying right now, and it's all your fault. DYING
...In all seriousness though, fucking rad as usual. I'm gonna go write more porn now. *prances off*
...In all seriousness though, fucking rad as usual. I'm gonna go write more porn now. *prances off*
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July 12, 2012 at 12:00 AM
(8) I love all these meta encounters that these two keep having and wasn't Tele good for a giggle :) Honestly how rude teleporting into rooms willy-nilly without permission, would have served him right if they had been having sex ;) Gotta admit a personal teleporter would be a rather handy thing to have.^^
And that was quite the cliff-hanger, I'm hoping it's Li just so we can finally find out what's going on with him, good or bad. I'm kind of hoping he's hiding out hoping that Ilya would come back to his flat because anything else could be rather bad. I admittedly want him to be a good guy or at the very least misinformed. And if that's the case then there's always the hope that once everything's explained to him he'll come to Ilya's side. Hopefully as part of his job he would report to higher-ups but without realizing what it was they were doing with that information, either that or he's an evil genius mastermind ;)
I can't wait for the next chapter to see who else is about join these two, I'm just sorry that you had to post this big mystery just as you're going away. Have a great vacation and we'll 'see' you when you get back ^_^
And that was quite the cliff-hanger, I'm hoping it's Li just so we can finally find out what's going on with him, good or bad. I'm kind of hoping he's hiding out hoping that Ilya would come back to his flat because anything else could be rather bad. I admittedly want him to be a good guy or at the very least misinformed. And if that's the case then there's always the hope that once everything's explained to him he'll come to Ilya's side. Hopefully as part of his job he would report to higher-ups but without realizing what it was they were doing with that information, either that or he's an evil genius mastermind ;)
I can't wait for the next chapter to see who else is about join these two, I'm just sorry that you had to post this big mystery just as you're going away. Have a great vacation and we'll 'see' you when you get back ^_^
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July 12, 2012 at 12:00 AM
OMG sooo good....need to know what happens next....one of the best yet most annoying cliffhangers ever.
Hugs Aduial
Hugs Aduial
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July 12, 2012 at 12:00 AM
omgg half way point? awesome! have fun on your trip!
i liked the description of the transportation. can't wait to see who's lurking in their apartment!
i liked the description of the transportation. can't wait to see who's lurking in their apartment!
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July 11, 2012 at 12:00 AM
And the plot thickens. I hope Ilya's going to be ok? Maybe it's Li behind him? I really hope Li isn't a bad guy :( Poor Ilya's going to be so heartbroken. Yikes. I love how we get to know more about Benry in every chapter :D
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July 11, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Super chapter!
Love the teleport idea a nice misdirection when you wrote about the motorcycle Tele was next to.
Looking forward to all the various types of powers emerging whenever a new metahuman is introduced –great fun ahead.
Very much enjoyed reading your explanation of Castor/Benry and his brother as famous Teleports, and the details surrounding Camry’s death. Lots of forethought, research (in names) and great reasoning.
Details of Ilya’s unknown involvement with LAMB gave more clarity to his importance. Never trusted Li -but still, there could be reasons behind the leak to LAMB - maybe Li is being coerced in some way and being forced to participate.
Whatever the reason, cannot wait for the details behind Li’s disappearance and how embroiled he really is.
Look forward to the 24th July with both Ilya and Benry, who it seems, will be acting out of character.
Love the teleport idea a nice misdirection when you wrote about the motorcycle Tele was next to.
Looking forward to all the various types of powers emerging whenever a new metahuman is introduced –great fun ahead.
Very much enjoyed reading your explanation of Castor/Benry and his brother as famous Teleports, and the details surrounding Camry’s death. Lots of forethought, research (in names) and great reasoning.
Details of Ilya’s unknown involvement with LAMB gave more clarity to his importance. Never trusted Li -but still, there could be reasons behind the leak to LAMB - maybe Li is being coerced in some way and being forced to participate.
Whatever the reason, cannot wait for the details behind Li’s disappearance and how embroiled he really is.
Look forward to the 24th July with both Ilya and Benry, who it seems, will be acting out of character.