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May 15, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Omg what a mess! But wait, I didn't think Alex and Zach were going anything but talking.
Oh, and Flora has some nerve calling Neil a freak b/c he has two dads! Her half-brother has two dads and HER FATHER is one of them! lol
Great chapter; extremely suspenseful. I hope they get things straightened out and Alex and James make up. After all; fifteen years together, having a child; it's a lot to just walk away from.
Ok, looking forward to the next update! :)
Oh, and Flora has some nerve calling Neil a freak b/c he has two dads! Her half-brother has two dads and HER FATHER is one of them! lol
Great chapter; extremely suspenseful. I hope they get things straightened out and Alex and James make up. After all; fifteen years together, having a child; it's a lot to just walk away from.
Ok, looking forward to the next update! :)
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May 13, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Whoa! Ok, back up! ALEX IS SCREWING AROUND WITH ZACH????? Fifteen years ago he wouldn't give him the time of day! What's going on?
And this is supposed to be fifteen years after Alex and James, so Flora should be fifteen. How old is Ian and Neil? And why isn't James rich anymore? Ha, nevermind, it's b/c Melrose has all his money, right? lol
Ok, I guess I'll just have to wait until the next chapter! :)
And this is supposed to be fifteen years after Alex and James, so Flora should be fifteen. How old is Ian and Neil? And why isn't James rich anymore? Ha, nevermind, it's b/c Melrose has all his money, right? lol
Ok, I guess I'll just have to wait until the next chapter! :)