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person anxiouslyeager
schedule July 20, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I'm glad Ian left...I honestly hope that Niel NEVER ends up with Ian. You can't do that to someone you like and expect everything to work out. I'm glad everyone's avoiding him, and I hope it stays that way. Let Elise have him!! Niel WAY beyond crossed the line, hope he never gets what he wants.
schedule July 19, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Wow, well I didn't see that one coming. I'm actually surprised Ian and his parents didn't press charges.

It still seems so out of character for Neil; he was always the good, sweet, adoring boy. What happened to him?

Well, it was a good story; I'm sorry to see it end.
schedule July 17, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Ok, what the hell is going on?

Neil has been hanging out with Flora since forever, being her slave and whatnot, and he NEVER MET HER MOTHER? Huh?

Also, is he on crack? Seriously, he DRUGGED AND RAPED Ian? That is so out of character! Why would he do something like that? All b/c Ian didn't want to get close to him. I understand he's been crushing on Ian since they first met, but really, DRUGGING AND RAPING HIM? That's unforgivable.

That being said, still looking forward to more! :)
schedule July 17, 2012 at 12:00 AM
OK, Neil is officially a psycho. I was kind of feeling sorry for him with how Ian was lying to him and his issues with Flora, but now I just feel sorry for them. I don't think you can forgive or get over someone drugging then blackmailling you. Talk about a total personality change. Will have to wait to see what happens next :)
schedule July 12, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Holy shit, Neil DRUGGED Ian???? What does he think he's gonna do with him now? He thinks Ian will be OK with this????

And wait, James and Alex PLANNED THE WHOLE BREAK-UP????? For all those years??? And wasn't Alex with Zach?

I think I'm getting confused. lol
schedule July 9, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Ok wait, so Ian is USING Neil? Or just completely lying to him? Or does he like him at all?

Neil would be crushed if he found out Ian totally lying to him!

Ahhh, you better hurry up and update! lol
person Lisa
schedule June 9, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Wow, so Ian's back, James is back and trying again with Alex. That's good to hear. I can't believe it's been eight years! Wow.

And Ian likes Neil the same way Neil likes Ian. Hmmm, Flora's not gonna like that! lol
schedule June 5, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Finally they meet again! :)

But why the hell is Neil following Flora around like a servent? Seriously, that previous chapter where he had to be her "slave", that wasn't a permanent thing, right? That's ridiculous; in today's day and age. And teachers ALLOW Neil to miss part of class to "attend" to Flora? What is she, the Queen of England? Seriously, that's fucked up.

Anyway, can't wait to read about their reunion! :) Maybe Flora will stop bossing him around long enough for him to get to know Ian again. Or better yet, maybe he'll grow a pair and finally tell her to fuck off. Oh, and why would people think they're a couple since they're related? lol
schedule June 1, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Holy crap! What just happened? Is James going back to NY? Will he fight for Alex? Inquiring minds want to know. Well, ok, just my mind. lol

Neil is so pussy-whipped. He really needs to develop some sort of backbone. How old is he again? How he can let a master manipulator like Flora rule him is beyond me. No good will come of this.

Ok, anxiously awaiting the next update! :)
person Lisa
schedule May 20, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Oh this is so sad! I thought James was just visiting his mom. He's living there now? What about Alex? What's going on with them?

Can't wait for the next chapter! :)