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I'm really liking this story right and I can't wait to see what happen next. Please, please, please, please update soon!

When do you think you'll post your next chapter I really can't wait to read it!

great start, really interesting, i cant wait to find out wat happens next, hope there is more soon!!

Interesting first chapter! I hope you continue!

Sounds promising!

I am hooked already and you have only written just one chapter. I feel bad for Bradley and hope that his mom and Rich figure out what happened and find him before it's too late. I am worried that Rich might convince Bradley's mom that he ran away or something. I am really curious as to why the 'Doctor' just grabbed him without thinking of the consequences of his actions. Isn't he afraid that Bradley's family might come looking for him? I am slightly worried that Rich knew what he was doing when he sent Bradley to the medical center to get a tylenol and am suspicious of his motives behind it. I hope you describe what Bradley looks like later so I can picture him in my head.

By the way, this is just a suggestion and totally up to you but I thought I would mention it anyway, you might want to allow anonymous reviews so readers who don't have an account can leave you a review. The way you have it set up now is to only allow signed-in reviews.

I have absolutely no idea what's going to happen next but I can't wait to find out! Brilliant start- keep updating!!