rate_review Reviews

i really liked the sexual tension between kyle and aaron.

(2) Such a very combustible pair but so hot and dangerous.^^ And the ending was so good, I don't think any of us saw that coming, it's probably a much more appropriate revenge then killing him. Although I have to wonder if Kyle will somehow work his magic and at worst he'll end up in some medium security prison because he has information. I just wouldn't be surprised if that did happen.

I definitely wish there was going to be more these guys are just so interesting but it was a fantastic read nonetheless ^_^

Truly enjoyed this short story.

Impressive pace, with solid meaty characters driving the story along and working well against the unfolding and layered plot. Great tension and atmosphere, making it a genuine compact thriller.

Great ending (sad about Pete), perfect for possible future continuation -possibly.

Great writing. Thank you for sharing.

I can't wait to read the next chapter, this was just so good :) I'm looking forward to the reunion and how it all plays out, plus Petey and Aaron are such great characters that I'm so looking forward to meeting Kyle^^

only a double-shot? darling, say it ain't so! you could really take this plot for a good run, it's off to a great start. lots of mixed in little taunts of deeper plotlines. very nice.

Nice detailed beginning (like the description of the bartender) drawing a picture of the history and relationship between Kyle and Aaron. Like the card game as their first face-to-face meeting.

So, Aaron finds out from Pete, who wants him to be a mentor, that Kyle is not doing so well. Would he consider helping? And can he really trust Pete?

Look forward to more soon!!!

ooo verrry interesting! can't wait to meet kyle!

this is interesting...........

Hey, I liked the first chapter! And I look forward into reading the rest. I wonder how the meeting will go with Kyle, will it end up in killing or mad passionate sex :D Heh, I am hoping for the later ;) And then... why don't all three of them work together? Mmh... Heh, anyway, thanks for sharing this!