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by inukitsune12

person FromAfar
schedule May 7, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Just sit back and watch a woman taking a lead.. she may be not in control of her desires, but she, at least, was able to stop and make some important points clear. Stability of a steady relationship, mutuality of feelings - it is important.
She seems quite sure of what, where and with who she wants. Does it mean she's more experienced of them two?
But what about this guilt and responsibility - exam, unappropriate setting, wrong time etc. - should they get in the way of the couple? Dit all that really matter? Such strong desire contained by some trivial circumstances - it's confusing for me.
Will we see the man's point of view next tiime? Will it be a stroy of their first time together or the whole 'blooming' of their romance?
Good luck with your writing!