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August 27, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Found this story randomly & liked it. Hope 2 c it go somewhere. Plz update???
Rukia
Rukia
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May 6, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Well, thanks for the chapter :3 I really liked it. And boy, do Cay keep getting more and more interesting. And all the poor boy wanted was to die. Well, we can't get all we want, ha ha. I'm really looking forward to see who's he's been bounded to, or who he's summond? Whatever it's supposed to be called xD
I really enjoyed this chapter. I also loved the "book-text" at the beginning of the chapter. It adds and extra dimension to the story. I'm really looking forward to see where you'll take this story. The world seems very rich and complex. Great work with thinking it out <3
I really enjoyed this chapter. I also loved the "book-text" at the beginning of the chapter. It adds and extra dimension to the story. I'm really looking forward to see where you'll take this story. The world seems very rich and complex. Great work with thinking it out <3
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May 4, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I write this on my phone, so if it's a bit weird, bear with me ;-)
I think this is a very promising story. The feeling I get is that you've put in lots of thought into it and have a nice plot for us to dive into. I like the flow and the world seems very very interesting. I can't wait to see it unfold :-D That said, there were a lot of short insights to a lot of people. I think it miguel have been smarter to take longer time with each character. I can tell that they are all important, but it became a little too jumpy and didn't really give them the spotlight they deserved. Also, since the first guy's situation was so very interesting, I had a harder time focusing on the other characters because I just wanted to go back to him and see what would happen there. Maybe you should end the chapter with him? Anyway, great story and good luck with it. I'll keep my eyes open for in :-)
I think this is a very promising story. The feeling I get is that you've put in lots of thought into it and have a nice plot for us to dive into. I like the flow and the world seems very very interesting. I can't wait to see it unfold :-D That said, there were a lot of short insights to a lot of people. I think it miguel have been smarter to take longer time with each character. I can tell that they are all important, but it became a little too jumpy and didn't really give them the spotlight they deserved. Also, since the first guy's situation was so very interesting, I had a harder time focusing on the other characters because I just wanted to go back to him and see what would happen there. Maybe you should end the chapter with him? Anyway, great story and good luck with it. I'll keep my eyes open for in :-)