rate_review Reviews

Wow! That was very hot :) you took me to another World that I could enjoy with your characters ^^ :)

...wow... just, well done!
it was fabulously overtop in every way! thank you! i really enjoyed it!

LOL LOVE IT VERY MUCH!!! PLEASE CONTINUE!!!
I love stories like these, so please, don't stop!

I see you've ventured into the realms that are not well-taken by many. But still, there are the few, like me, who'd actually be brave enough (or stupid, i don't know) to voice out.

THAT WAS AWESOME MAN!

very nicely written, and the 'believable-lity' of it all is quite good, well written as I've said. would this have more coming? If it starts this intense, Eros knows what else you have coming up.
But as a stand-alone, its great too.