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for Island Slave

by vividwhite

schedule May 3, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Didn't you post this already? It had several chapters up before, too.
person Nine
schedule May 3, 2012 at 12:00 AM
wahhh little slave boy seems very lovely and heartbreak in already so the next chapter will probably push me into crying outright... I am just so relieved that the prince seems like such a decent guy... (though how decent can someone be really who buys another person lol)
I love this, thank you for continuing it
person Nine
schedule May 1, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Yes please! Please continue it! especially if there are 5 chapters already written!
I hope the person with appendicitis is okay now!
I am intrigued that this chapter was from the point of view of neither the slave nor the prince... a bit different to the usual 'let's buy/get sold as a sex slave' fic... so you have my attention!
as for that poor slave boy! I can't wait for him to be cleaned up, the poor little thing! I am intrigued by this world, by these two islands and the way things work... and the fact that the guy gambled almost all of his prince's money away made me laugh... and then the fact that the mean-to-his-slaveboy guy felt so bad about the fact that this guy had lost his money that he offered him a choice from his stable for one night made me laugh even more...
this is really interesting please continue it!
(and take care) (hope you are feeling alright now)
person Kiira
schedule May 1, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Yay, a new story! And it looks really interesting so definitelly worth to continue! Like the other reviewer said, I too like that this first chapter was from Galen's bow. Cirris will be the one right? I think that once they clean him up and dress him nice even Galen might be surprised, positively? It was yes very foolish for him to gamble, but well, sometimes we just make foolish things I guess.
What a sad faith it is though, to end up a an unwilling sex slave... I feel sorry for the boy already.
Anyway, I can't wait to see where this is going!

p.s: I hope everything is alriht now?