rate_review Reviews

The summary made me LOL!
I like reading everything you write, this too of course! :D,
but I can't get emotionally invested in reading about Baisyl with someone else now, because the main story is still in progress. I know that's idiotic, but that's just how I feel (sorry:)
Still, haha, it's kinda fun seeing Baisyl like this :) xx

I actually started to cry a little at the end of this story... maybe I am just pms-ing... but the loneliness... the feeling of loss, isolation, hollowness... it was really intense... I need a happily-ever-after for Cale... though I suppose that is too much to ask... As usual, the writing was fantastic, the smex was smexy, but I can't believe how bittersweet it was. So unexpected in story like that... you are amazing to engender that much pathos for a character who is kind of minor (in terms of plot) oh cale! I just don't know how things can get better for him...

Love this story!Excellent mix of cuteness and hotness!

I love the description, though I couldn't help but blush at some things. Then I realized where I was... right, this is AFF. So, it's porn and it doesn't exactly have plot but it didn't really read that way. I read your other short with Cale and despite the brevity it didn't feel like a pwp. Baisyl (sp?) is a fleshed out character, even if I hadn't read your longer, chaptered story, and so is the other lad. It was worth the time and effort, and you're right. It deserved a review. I found myself actually caring about this kid, and he does seem sweet. Anyway, thanks, which is the short version of what I'm saying.