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January 26, 2013 at 12:00 AM
i like cole. i like the story, i hope for more chapters
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June 29, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I loved this story so much!
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June 6, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Love it!!!
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May 1, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Ahhhhhhh I fucking LOVE Baisyl. What a pest! He makes me laugh. I believe I've mentioned this before. ^_^ I also really like your writing style, sort of elaborate and stilted, very fitting for the setting.
I wouldn't mind seeing more of Cale, to be honest, although maybe his thing for Baisyl... maybe it could be more of a little crush? The main character never getting what he wants makes for such an unsatisfying read, in the long run. But yeah, if you feel like writing about Cale some time, I'll read it.
I wouldn't mind seeing more of Cale, to be honest, although maybe his thing for Baisyl... maybe it could be more of a little crush? The main character never getting what he wants makes for such an unsatisfying read, in the long run. But yeah, if you feel like writing about Cale some time, I'll read it.
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April 29, 2012 at 12:00 AM
This story is very good! Cale is so cute!
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April 29, 2012 at 12:00 AM
This was lovely. But I feel so bad for poor Cale, can't Baisyl like him back even just a little. And I mean I know he likes him, he thinks he's cute and all, but... Oh poor Cale, lol. It was really good though, I enjoyed it immensely. And I do hope we'll get to see more of them, even if it does end up being heartbreakingly one sided. Thanks for writing :).
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April 29, 2012 at 12:00 AM
You have a lot of talent. I only wish I could write as well as you. I would love to have seen another chapter to this story but if this is all we get then that is fine. A wonderful story. Please write more.
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April 29, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Har har...your post-story comment was most amusing; I'm tempted to adopt it simply because it makes sense, and is a little more inviting than begging for a review.
A most excellent one-shot; the characters were likable and their dialogues both easy to understand and delightfully entertaining to read. They were, albeit, slightly cliche'd, though I suppose that it can't be helped. Homoerotica has such love for the well-spoken, calm and controlled gentleman seme and his red-in-the-face, completely-undone uke; I myself am guilty of such pairings and it certainly is entertaining. You write it very well, and I look forward to seeing what else you've dabbled in.
A most excellent one-shot; the characters were likable and their dialogues both easy to understand and delightfully entertaining to read. They were, albeit, slightly cliche'd, though I suppose that it can't be helped. Homoerotica has such love for the well-spoken, calm and controlled gentleman seme and his red-in-the-face, completely-undone uke; I myself am guilty of such pairings and it certainly is entertaining. You write it very well, and I look forward to seeing what else you've dabbled in.
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April 29, 2012 at 12:00 AM
quite a nice story so far. i enjoyed it
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April 29, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I may not be familiar with your story's universe but it didn't stop me from thoroughly enjoying this ^_^ I loved Baisyl's teasing but who could really blame him when Cale stutters and blushes so adorably.^^ And Cale seems sweet but lonely or maybe a little lost, it's amazing how after one little story you can end up feeling so much for a character. It was such a great little oneshot, I'll have to keep my eyes open for more :)