rate_review Reviews

Can't wait for you to do more with this story.

You do sexy, sarcasm, and humor with delicately delicious flair. No wonder you picked the Bleach anime for your other writing indulgences, if offers so many beautiful, weird, and perverse characters as fodder for kinky pairings. Forgive me for all this rude praise, since you seem to crave or prefer crude and vulgar critism, to fuel your muse. But alas since I'm imperfect in my own writing, editing, and spelling skills, forgive me, but I can only offer praise... and you will have to deal with it!

Look forward to reading more about your deadly sexy vampire and his dates! Hope the pretty sweet bunny will last a little longer than the others and Mr Vamp doesn't put out the trash too soon!
Gslinger

I tried your YIM but it didn't connect, so I am replying here!

LOL I was only critizing my own editing, grammar, and spelling, so I don't make it a point of critizing other authors since I can't get my own right. All I know is I like your story for its humor and sarcasm. I like the characters the vampire and the bunny, but Mr Vampire gets bored with his lovers and then kills them," thus the he put's out the trash!" I just rather see the bunny turned than dead!

Soft spot for Bunnies, Gslinger

huh. interesting start with the whole black widow thing going on. I look forward to more.