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for Silent (Rewrite)

by Kiira

schedule April 26, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I liked the first chapter so much, had to visit your homepage to read further!
person Jen
schedule April 26, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Hello!
First off I just like to say you are amazing :)I have fallen in love with your writing! It has just engulfed me and I enjoy reading your story silent so much. I was actually only about half way through your original version of it and then I noticed this. Haha. I was wondering if you could actually send me the link to where I can finish reading the original story and then I will definetly move on to reading the rewritten version when I'm done :) thank you so much for sharing this amazing story with us. Just send the link to my email when you get the chance ifyou don't mind :) thanks so much!
schedule April 26, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I'm so glad you reposted this!

The first chapter definitely illustrates the confusion of gay feelings in teenaged boys. (or girls for that matter) Poor Michael! In love with his friend, teased with a kiss filled with suffocated lust-- I love that phrase by the way! ;)

This won't be easy. If only Tony realized how much fun it would be to surrender to the feelings and go for it!

On to the next chapter...
schedule April 26, 2012 at 12:00 AM
He told his parents! And he was so right about how they would take it. I had hoped that they would be better than that, since he had had it so rough at school. He needs someone on his side.

Going from popular most gorgeous guy in village to being shunned... I know it really does happen but its so sad! How alone he must feel.

I am once more hooked on your story. ;) Please keep posting more chapters!