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June 3, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Yeah, he's in NY, maybe he'll have some chance to scream bloody murder!
Here's hoping for the best! :)
Here's hoping for the best! :)
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May 31, 2012 at 12:00 AM
yes , you're more explicit this time ^_^ keep up the good work <3
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May 31, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Hmmm, and I always thought 'madder' wasn't a word. Oh well...
Hope your trip to Ireland went well. :)
So...I thought George was the non-violent one! Ha! Poor Michael; he can't catch a break. I thought with Ricky gone, George could somehow get Michael out of there, but I guess I was wrong.
I really see no hope for Michael ever leaving that place w/o Ricky.
As always, I anxiously await the next update! :)
Hope your trip to Ireland went well. :)
So...I thought George was the non-violent one! Ha! Poor Michael; he can't catch a break. I thought with Ricky gone, George could somehow get Michael out of there, but I guess I was wrong.
I really see no hope for Michael ever leaving that place w/o Ricky.
As always, I anxiously await the next update! :)
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May 22, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Such a gut wrenching chapter. I'm glad Michael is stronger than Evan. Sicky Ricky! You have done very well showing us the depths of his perversion.
I felt so sorry for Michael and I know that it's going to get worse.
Well written, and thanks for sharing it, again.
I felt so sorry for Michael and I know that it's going to get worse.
Well written, and thanks for sharing it, again.
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May 18, 2012 at 12:00 AM
were the story be the same as before with leo and the french guy or will it turn out differently :)
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May 17, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Michael is being very brave; trying to calm himself down. He now realizes what Ricky wants him to do and he realizes Ricky is trying to break him.
I don't see Michael ever being able to escape Ricky. Unless for some reason Ricky pisses off George enough and George kills Ricky and shows pity on Michael. Otherwise, I think Michael's fucked.
Great chapter. I was crying along with Michael.
Oh, I noticed a typo: '.....Michael gritted his teeth, forced himself......before Ricky would get madder.' Madder isn't a word. Angrier, yes, but not madder.
I look forward to the next chapter. =)
I don't see Michael ever being able to escape Ricky. Unless for some reason Ricky pisses off George enough and George kills Ricky and shows pity on Michael. Otherwise, I think Michael's fucked.
Great chapter. I was crying along with Michael.
Oh, I noticed a typo: '.....Michael gritted his teeth, forced himself......before Ricky would get madder.' Madder isn't a word. Angrier, yes, but not madder.
I look forward to the next chapter. =)
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May 14, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Poor Michael. It sounds like his nightmare has only just begun. Even worse now that he's not in his own country- makes it harder to get away. I hope his family or Tony start looking for him soon. Looking forward to more updates!
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May 11, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Chapters 6 and 7
Great chapters! So much angst, which I love! And I like the rougher parts without too much detail, since that leaves it to the readers imagining. I think its written perfectly.
That Ricky is so conniving, so evil, such a bastard! The way he coldly goes about setting up this elaborate scheme. You have made Michael such a sad, hopeful and likeable character. The opposite of Ricky, who deserves to have it bitten off, like he is so afraid of happening.
Five stars! Looking forward to more...
Great chapters! So much angst, which I love! And I like the rougher parts without too much detail, since that leaves it to the readers imagining. I think its written perfectly.
That Ricky is so conniving, so evil, such a bastard! The way he coldly goes about setting up this elaborate scheme. You have made Michael such a sad, hopeful and likeable character. The opposite of Ricky, who deserves to have it bitten off, like he is so afraid of happening.
Five stars! Looking forward to more...
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May 11, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Poor Michael. How is he going to get out of this? He's trapped in a house with two sicko pedo's in the middle of Bumfuck Mexico.
I don't see any way out for him. Unless someone comes to rescue him? Idk......I'll just have to be patient and wait for the next chapter! lol
I don't see any way out for him. Unless someone comes to rescue him? Idk......I'll just have to be patient and wait for the next chapter! lol
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May 11, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Woah things are getting intense I just hope it has a happy ending :0 oh and thank you for the birthday wishes!<3