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Very good so far!

I want to hope that Jean is as nice as he seems, but I'm nervous for Michael and Jack. Jean seems too good to be true, you know? And what does he do that he has so much money and he's subletting an apartment? Did you mention it in the last chapter; I don't remember.

Wouldn't it be wonderful if Jean could take them both to Paris with him, but Ricky and Joe know skeevy people in France I'm sure. How safe would M&J be there? Oh, Michael should tell Jean about Ricky's tapes and what he did with his 'friend' way back when.

But again, can Jean be trusted?

Great chapter Kolgrim. Always looking foward to more, but I gotta tell ya, my anxiety level is thru the roof when I read an update from you! lol

Kolgrim! You're back! You're taking a break from Joni's sequel? lol Which I still want to read one of these days. =)

I didn't realize that Michael and Jack are allowed outside. I would love to ask what's stopping them from running away/and/or going to the cops and telling them what's going on. But I guess if they got ahold of Ricky he would just spin them a set of lies. Oh unless Michael tells the cops of Ricky's secret room and all those tapes of Evan. Wonder what they would think of that? Ah, Ricky would probably be out on bail before Jack could say 'drug money'. Then Michael would be in deep, deep doo-doo.

I'm just really worried that Jack is getting in over his head with all the drugs and prostitution he's doing.

I'm anxiously looking foward to the next chapter. :)

Yeah, one day people will know how sick Ricky is, but how is Michael going to accomplish this?

I thought Ricky was sick and twisted before, but now, with reading what he did to his BEST FRIEND, he is truly a monster. A psycho. I'm so afraid for Michael and Jack now.

And of course Ricky and Joe know about Michael and Jack. Don't they have cameras set up in both houses/apartments? How could they NOT know?

I'm glad you're back to writing Kolgrim! Looking forward to the next update! :)

I really like this chapter, it highlights the depths of perversion of Ricky, that he was a sicko even as a kid. Poor Evan. It also has Michael and Jack with some happy moments in their lives.

More, please!

I was curious and was wondering about this (don't know if you can answer it somehow) but when Ricky hit and killed Michael's grandmother wouldn't the police have found some evidence at the crime scene from the hit and run like a piece of windshield, grate, bumber or something to trace back to the 'killer' we know is Ricky? What did he do with the car, it must have alot of damage and blood on it? Isn't he afraid someone will find it and know it was his car?

Loved this new chapter! It brought tears to my eyes hearing about Jack's sad past. I just don't see any way they can escape these horrible men.

And if Jack thinks there are no cameras around, he's more naive than I thought. I bet the cameras are even programmed into Joe's laptop so he can watch everything those kids are doing.

I just hope they're careful.

Looking forward to the next installment! :)

I feel so sad for Jack and hope that he finds freedom and gets help for his drug addiction. I hope that him and Michael stay friends for life. I am curious to what happens next. I love this story and your writing is addictive. Thanks for updating!

Oh my gosh! I really love reading angst/kidnapping/BDSM stories like this and your's is really great. I hope Michael eventually escapes and finds true happiness and love with someone special who will take care of him. I am reading another one somewhat like this called 'Waiting in the Throes' by MaddoxGrey which is really good too and you might like to read it. It's still a WIP just like 'Silent' and I think you will find it fascinating just as much as I do. I will keep an eye out for future updates and apologize for not reviewing this story before. I am hooked now so you won't get rid of me and I am a review stalker, LOL. By the way, you are doing a great job writing something like this and my heart goes out to Michael. I hope it has a happy ending but will have to wait and see.

Jeez, and in a normal life they could have been b/f's.

How sad is that that Jack had to sell his body at such a young age. At any age it's sad.

I definitely think getting stoned is the way to go. Block out your real feelings and just let the weed take over. lol

I'm not looking forward to the next chapter where they have to service those old perverts.

There was one thing that was bugging me. Ricky leaves Michael alone in the apartment all day. He's not allowed to leave, or call home. Did Michael ever think of calling the police? Yes, he did go with him willingly, but Ricky is raping him and he's underage...I don't know. Ha, they'd probably be on Ricky's side. Who knows? It was just a thought.