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I think I finished your story (well, until chapter 22) in less than two days ^^

I just couldn't stop reading! 

So yeah, you could say I really enjoyed it so far. What makes it really special for me is the fact, that it has so many twists and turns. So many things happen that I was absolutely not able to predict! Every time I thought I knew how this was going to continue (or end), another change happened to the story which made it super interesting and exciting ^^

As for characters: I like the protagonist, of course, but I also really liked Jack and I feel sad that he had to say goodbye. Maybe Michael will meet him again? And for Jean.. it's really hard to choose between sympathy and hate ^^" We'll see, I guess, if he deserves a little sympathy or if he treats Michael even worse in the continuing story. 

Oh yeah, and I actually thought Michael would kill Ricky to regain his freedom XD~ Well, there you see how bad I was at predicting your story. ^^

Please continue writing, as this is one of the few good abduction/rape stories here that still goes on and isn't yet abandoned. I'm looking forward to the next chapter(s)!!

Yay for Sam!  And no, Michael, Jean is a bad bad man. Run away with Sam!  I'm excited to see how everything bites and what will change in the story!  Xoxo Robin

I'm so happy to see another chapter!  I'm flattered my review helped your motivation!  Thank you!  I went to your website and read a whole bunch of the original. I can really see improvement in your writing, but I enjoyed it. The story ideas are solid and interesting. I can't wait to see what you'll do on this rewrite. Yay!  Xoxo Robin

Agh omg I love it!! I think Sam and Micheal are gonna date and be awesome together ;) I hope so. Keep writing I love it!!!!!!! Also if oh ever need a beta my email is jjssffll@gmail.com. Love it, and I can't wait for more:)

this is getting better... hopely michael will find his happiness, and jack too..... I dnot want ricky coming back into the nexr chapter..

Pls continue writing.. thanks for ur effort

This story has been completely enthralling. I just want to save Michael and put him in my pocket. I get the feeling that things are going to go badly with Jean and Patrick. I'm interested to see how Sam will work in. Can't wait for more. Xoxo Robin

Thank you for Chapter 17. It made me cry with Michael and angry at Jean for becomeing just another user. I mean, what did the guy expect? Did he think he could buy a human and have it function like a toy from the toy store? (-> Push the belly and it will lough) I hope Michael will get in contact with normal people so he remembers how things should be. Whereever you decide to take the story, i look forward to it. What i like most about your writing is, that you not only let us know what the main character feels and thinks. You let us see into the minds and emotions behind many people that are involved. The reader gets different point of views and with your exciting storyline its the best combination to get me addicted ;)

It seems like Michael got another owner. If gratitude is not enough to tie Michael, Jean will mostly find a way to keep grasp on him (using Jack to blackmail him or chaining him). And his Friend Eric might be the same. Maybe his "partner" Paul is more like a pet than a partner... I'm glad that the stories got news chapters.

Great story! I like your writing style and I'm really curious how it will go on. Will Jack even be able to make it through rehab when he's got no perspective, nothing to live for, no way to find Michael, to make sure he is alright? I love that Character and I'm anxious if he'll be alright. And how will Michael react once he realises that he's been left out of the decision and lied to. I'd be so angry if I found out people would make decisions over my head "for my own good"! Anyways, you got me hooked. Please keep writing!

tell me Jack and Michael will be together again some day... hell I'm crying for both of them even now.... just read all of the chapters up to now..