rate_review Reviews

I must admit that I have trouble seeing the main character as anything but a villain at this point.

Particularly with regard to her treatment of Bridget.
She basically 'recruited' Bridget just be her punching bag (i.e. a safe target for her to unleash her anger and darker impulses on).

She doesn't even hate Bridget, she just torments Bridget because she wants to and she can.

Frankly if Bridget really has 'given up' as your story seems to imply, then (in real life at least) there's a very good chance that she would be suicidal at this point. She might simply stop eating or die due to her mistreatment.

On the plus side your sex scenes have gotten better over time, and the basic concept of the Carth Cops itself is intriguing.

I used to like kit but after reading the last few chapters, im staring to dislike her. I mean she is basicly a spoiled brat and a danm rapist. Really though i dont like her anyone. She became of the people she catches. I understand that sex is apart of her job but it doesnt give her the right young virgins because she didnt like their personalty. Im not saying your writing is bad im just saying that i dont like what you with kit. I like really did like kit before you changed her.

I just LOVE this story!!!!
It's so different and interesting.

Ohh will Jessy marry Todd since he needs someone to marry.
Since they're all a family they'd always be together.
Plus it'd get Jessy's parents off her back and Todd wouldn't have to worry about other people.

Well can't wait to find out :D