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Poor Kisha, he's such a sweet boy, all he wants is someone's (anyone's) attention and approval. I suspect his clumsiness stems from nerves, since he doesn't seem to have any problems when he's alone. Hope he finds the right Dom to help him blossom!

Poor thing he try to hard, can't wait to read more.

Will you plz continue with this one :) Want to know what happens next
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Please, update soon... :)

So now he is sold!!! I can't wait to learn more about his new master^^ See you again soon!!!

wow so glad i booked marked this. i almost forgot about it... i hope he ends up alright at the market..... and i hope he sees his firend again.. his history got me thinking all night long.. could he be a dom but something happend and he was raised as a sub?? (hence he not really good at the sub stuff) could he be the son of a dom/sub and a human mother.. hence his 1/2 bolld makes him weeker and he cant do magic well??? could he be the son of the highest clan and that why he sees if firend again?? soo meny possiblities running though my head. i hope that you update this quickly so i can get my anwsers. i gont care what derection this goes in i just really want to read more and more as soon as i can. you have a good basic plot and charter devlopment i dont ueaslly see in new ideads and charters that dont come out of another story. well done defining them. there mostly 3D, well rounded well though out chatrers. and the place and decriptions well i got sivers up my arm from imaging been at the public auction.

please keep wrting for the love of all your readers. and i look forword to seeing more wrtiitngs in your style

p.s if you wish to contact me anout something i said: maxlene@velocitynet.com.au

this is sad, but oh so very good, you cant help but feel sad for Kisha ..i love it and i cant wait for more, plz uppdate soon!!

i hope little kisha has a goood future to look forward to! i am so enjoying this story

OH I'm def. hooked! Great start!! Can't wait to see what's next.

I like this story so far, the only draw back is that your grammar is a little weak. You should consider having someone edit your work.