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for Taboo formerly Bleeding Heart

by pittwitch

person Anon
schedule August 28, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 7 - Thunder

What a gorgeous way to describe a storm: "...the sky gods waged war against the earth-dwellers." Right there, you just wrapped me up in this magical world, fiercer and wilder than our own.

And I do believe Dorthea is more than a match for her Marcas, a wonderful strong woman with her own brand of magic. They are lovely together, these two.

I love this story, and I'm eager to see what lies ahead. Simply enchanting!
person Anon
schedule August 3, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Season

This was simply wonderful, and the King is quite the presence. And now I'll be all sixes and sevenses until I find out what this purification entails...
person Anon
schedule July 28, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Seashore

Your elves are captivating - fierce and deadly and magical. It's almost frustrating that this is based on the prompts, and the chapter needs to end after only a thousand words, when I would gladly read much more. I am so loving this one, Witchy!
person Anesor
schedule April 14, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I would like to read this when its a bigger piece! I love a good fantasy mystery.

That he's an elf was revealed a bit late in this bit, and classifying it as a threesome confused me a little as well. But tell me more Uncle Remus!
person Anon
schedule April 13, 2012 at 12:00 AM
A new storyline, and I'm on the edge of my seat and captivated already. This has your trademark intriguing characters who are rich and vivid already in so short a time, and your gorgeously evocative imagery that puts me in the heart of the scene.

Flashfics make for the wickedest cliffhangers, and this one is more wicked than most. I'll be waiting eagerly for the next installment, you clever Witch.