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I wrote a long ass review but it disappear when i tried to post it damn you aff! so basically i wanna say that i love your writings and that i spot some common errors. and arthur’s such a fail. cya next chap =)

Aww... It started out so happy and warm and loving and then... Ouch... I feel sad for the twins, well the whole family really, what a crushing way to lose their loved ones. Hm, but it is important for the plot, I just didn't know what to expect, I basically just clicked into the story and then the phone rang and dished had to done and all, lol, and I came back to the computer forgetting what the summary said and read and... *sad face* I'm sorry for my rambling, heh, I do find this interesting and plan on reading it, so I hope there's an upsate soon :)

The twins seem so cute and I like James and Arthur too. But poor kids, shame to lose their parents at so young. But I keep up with the hope that everything works out for them, I'm sure that James and Arthur would make great parents ;)

Where have I read this before? Was it over on GA? But your name wasn't attached to it, was it EmD?

I know I read this before; I think a few months ago.....

Looking forward to the next chapter, b/c for some reason I don't remember reading any further.