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I really like how Paulie is so human like now. It's sweet and kind of cool.

Still fav'ing like mad on my newer laptop. I was happy that I finally found another update for this, since I couldn't import my book marks.

Curious, what kind of kinks would Paulie like?

i love this story and i love it more with every chapter, SUCH GREAT CHARACTERIZATION!!!! keep up the good work :)

I am loving this story so far. I especially like the bits that get more into Paulie's mind. Your sex scenes are pretty nifty as well. :3 I'll definitely be back to read more of your work, you're very talented. ^^

Thank you for the update! It was great.
Paulie is adorable, I just want to hug him to pieces.
And Finn is such a good, genuine person. Together they're amazing.
And the smut is hot, as illegel-hot. Superb!

Had to run through the whole story again from the beginning. The nuances in Paulie's behavior are always there, but become more fun as the chapters progress. That you have from the beginning hinted that there is a sense of humour hiding underneath, is fun, and subtle. Well done. Can't wait to read more.
Finn's approach seems oddly human -- I see my self as monolithicly consistent. Yet, I know that how I react to something changes from day to day. And Finn seems oddly concerned with Paulie's treatment at times, and calloused at others. Very well done, very good. And thank you.

As beautifully written as ever. and the smut was so stylish and not clumsy and icky. But then, that is what I am used to when I read your stories. Although, I must confess, I couldnt get past the beginning of Berserk... even although it is the name of one of my favourite mangas, i couldnt get past the horror of it... but maybe i was just in a mood that day? because you are assuring us that there is heart breaking romance... perhaps i should give it another go?
as for stockholm, i am sooo excited at the prospect of another chapter. I thought you might be going to leave it how it is. and i was a little lonely because of all the questions still unanswered.
as for this chapter of stardust, my favourite bit is definitely the moment when paulie was calculating his cost vs value lol

ah an ethical dilemma
i love the depth of this story
i love how he wanted a companion.
that Paulie is becoming that for him.
keep writing :)

I like this story.
:) You should update it.

Ok I figured out how to make sign in stuff but it's a pain in the ass. So I will be bouncing back and forth! Glad you don't have anon disabled.

Still enjoy the fact that Paulie is getting more and more "humanoid like," and coherent as the story goes along. I'm guessing he might become...even more.

I'm dumb I can't figure out the foreshadowing except for that. Maybe.

Oh and that was the best rape I read in a long time. I usually read more gritty, scat, and downright nasty ones ugh. Like you don't even, or don't want to know.

Wait was I the first to pick up on the change of writing/tone between the two? O_o I didn't think so.

Still I rather enjoy this story and it's still bookmarked, sort of. I forget to check my bookmarks so I just look through updates like a lazy person ._.

I don't care how slow this is, just DONT DROP IT.

I love this fic! Finn is so wonderfully human and Paulie's just too adorable. And that rape scene was utterly hot.
Thank you so much!