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January 28, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Damn it!! You made me cry! That doesn't usually happen while reading stories. Damn it! That's not fair. You don't cry at mine!
Well done, I didn't foresee that happening.
Well done, I didn't foresee that happening.
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January 28, 2013 at 12:00 AM
This story is amazing. I love the concept and details in the interaction between characters.
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January 26, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Stardust, as a title, evokes the idea that while "we are the stuff that dreams are made of" we are also recycled star-dust, hydrogen and helium recycled through super-novae to become the elements that humans (and everything else)are, indeed "We are the stuff stars are made of." Finn purchases an Artificial Intelligence, a Cybernetic-Genetically Human companion, names it Paulie, and it ... behaves wonderfully, it is everything that Finn wants, ... Plus an unwanted little bit more. In Chapter 7 Paulie's issues with his programs-- pre-loaded sex scenes-- spontaneously starting up motivates Finn to call the manufacturer for an appointment, to correct the "Glitches".
By far the most skillfully written of the sex scenes in the story so far, possibly the hottest sex in the whole story, depending on your tastes. I recommend this to anyone into M/M or interested in The Border between meat-based Vs. Silicon-based intelligence.
By far the most skillfully written of the sex scenes in the story so far, possibly the hottest sex in the whole story, depending on your tastes. I recommend this to anyone into M/M or interested in The Border between meat-based Vs. Silicon-based intelligence.
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January 25, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I really like your story. It's "cute" and sexy at the same time. I hope you give them a happy end.
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January 19, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Hey, I just exited the story and realized I haven't subscribed. And I was like - "Why on Earth haven't I subscribed?"
And I was so surprised by my lack of initiative because I really like your story. I don't know if you work something with computers but I'm amazed how well you've managed to grasp the cool logic and the struggle with emotions. I get thrilled when I think of the way you'll think for them to be really together in the end. Because judging by what I've read so far, it's going to be something very plausible. That's of course only in the scenario where you run for us 'Happy Ending' which I direly hope you will *wink wink*
I'm really looking forward to the next chapter. I have the dreadful feeling that they are going to mess up something in Paulie on that maintenance thing. I only hope it won't be something irreversible. He's really grown on me, all facts and whispered emotions.
And I was so surprised by my lack of initiative because I really like your story. I don't know if you work something with computers but I'm amazed how well you've managed to grasp the cool logic and the struggle with emotions. I get thrilled when I think of the way you'll think for them to be really together in the end. Because judging by what I've read so far, it's going to be something very plausible. That's of course only in the scenario where you run for us 'Happy Ending' which I direly hope you will *wink wink*
I'm really looking forward to the next chapter. I have the dreadful feeling that they are going to mess up something in Paulie on that maintenance thing. I only hope it won't be something irreversible. He's really grown on me, all facts and whispered emotions.
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January 19, 2013 at 12:00 AM
The feelings are building up~~~~~ :D
Good to see your update! Thanks! and good update! XD
I hope the 'technical visit' goes well..... what if the company decides to give Finn another model coz this one is 'broken'. CRAP! noooooooooooooo~~~
Good to see your update! Thanks! and good update! XD
I hope the 'technical visit' goes well..... what if the company decides to give Finn another model coz this one is 'broken'. CRAP! noooooooooooooo~~~
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January 17, 2013 at 12:00 AM
oh that was brilliant! what a way to end a chapter XD seriously i love this story sooooooo much your characterization, your plot, your sex scenes, your fluff scenes, is there nothing you can't do!? There is no feasible way to convey my love for this story so i hope this humble comment will suffice and encourage you to write more and post quickly ;) THANK YOU!!!!!!
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January 16, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Hahaha if Paulie wasn't Paulie that would had hurt. Still creative way to make use of a makeshift enema.
To be honest I liked the rimming but -shrugs- I'm kind of weird. I personally can't do it and....well I sound like a pervert.
Ending was bittersweet; I worry about Paulie but its going to be alright. He has Finny after all. Maybe he's improving and upgrading and part of him can't keep up? Or something else? It would break my heart if it was something more serious.
To be honest I liked the rimming but -shrugs- I'm kind of weird. I personally can't do it and....well I sound like a pervert.
Ending was bittersweet; I worry about Paulie but its going to be alright. He has Finny after all. Maybe he's improving and upgrading and part of him can't keep up? Or something else? It would break my heart if it was something more serious.
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January 16, 2013 at 12:00 AM
hehe, it's a really good story. AI explaining why he plays games, screensavers, how does it feel to be without body.
lots of fun.
and sex:D
lots of fun.
and sex:D
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January 16, 2013 at 12:00 AM
My heart! Oh, my heart...You're killing me! I adore Paulie so. I wish only the best for him. I'll be gnawing on the corner of my laptop until the next update!