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April 10, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Hmm, nice. I'd like it if we could learn more about these AIs. Do they age like a normal person or have similar bodily needs? Its a good story up until now, considering this is only the first chapter.
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April 10, 2012 at 12:00 AM
The only thing disappointing about this story is that i clicked the next chapter button and there wasn't one ;-)
Looking forward to an update and happy writing
Looking forward to an update and happy writing
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April 10, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I'm very intrigued so far. :) I realty like your writing style and how you began this; am very lookin forward to reading more!
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April 10, 2012 at 12:00 AM
aw, I wanted to read more~~~
more chapters!!! and longer chapters too, please :)
The name Finn caught me, then, AI .
I like the theme, and hope you write more :)
more chapters!!! and longer chapters too, please :)
The name Finn caught me, then, AI .
I like the theme, and hope you write more :)
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April 10, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I enjoy your story so far. Very intriguing. Honestly I was a little relieved when you said they were going to age him a bit and I'd love to read more. I like your writing style ^^
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April 9, 2012 at 12:00 AM
very interesting concept. I always think AI stories have a unique element to them. wonder how this will go. great job!