rate_review Reviews

awesome new chapter! really interesting to see how the Al 'works' inside and the 'brain'.

i'm really loving this story! kind of different and definitely hot, loving the characters. poor kid doesn't know what to do. can't wait to read more![:

Initial reaction: AWWWWW!!!
This is adorable. I can't wait to see what else happens between these two. They're so...so... Touching. It's almost too cute. :)
Keep up the good work!

This is really interesting! It is not how I assumed it would be... it is not the typical "let's buy and use a robotic sex slave" scenario... (which is a good thing)
Also, it is incredibly well written! The personality of Finn is a relief! I really thought he was going for the 12 year old specimen and then... relief! He seems like a good guy! His AI also seems like he has some cute personality shaping up so I am really looking forward to more of this!

I really like how the AI is having a hard time adjusting to emotions. I think it makes the story a bit more realistic and I'm glad Finn is acting like a good guy and not abusing him. Suggestions to sex scenes? It's not really a kink or anything in my opinion, but I wouldn't mind a purely decadent night with the whole nice fancy room with silk, maybe some chocolate or something they can lick off each other, flower petals, lots or touching and massaging type of thing. There sounds like they'll be a lot of different possibly weird things going on and I think the AI should get spoiled and pampered with what I mentioned above or maybe the AI can take the lead? Whichever is less normal for the story I suppose. Great job and looking forward to the next chapter! :)

This seems interesting! I wasn't sure about Finn at first, whether he'd be likable character or not, I'm glad that he is! :D And Al... I hope he gets a name soon ;) But anyway, I like how he starts having these human thoughts, maybe they develope as real feelings? I wonder if in the end Al really starts to behave even more like a human, with his own definite opinions and such. I haven't read many this kind of stories with Andoids, I just started an rp involving one and it got me curious about this.
I've also read few chapters of your other story: Return ticket to Stockholm, I think I was in chapter four with that and I will review it later as well ;)
I like your writing!

I really enjoy this type of story, but always have a hard time finding a good one. I really enjoyed this though, great organization and writing style. I look forward to more so I hope you'll update soon.

Ooooo. I really like the premise for this - and even moreso that the main character isn't interested in fucking a middle-school-aged kid. Can't wait to see what happens!
Also, your English is remarkably good for not being your primary language. :)

--Thirteen

I think this is an interesting start. So far, I like the main character. Although, I hope the next update will be nice and smutty

Hooray, a good AI story in the works! I must say I find the idea intriguing. I'll check back to see how it develops, keep going.