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by attackegg

person anonagain
schedule June 12, 2012 at 12:00 AM
great chapter! very interesting to read the progress of finn seeming to "humanize" the al...or paulie...now. it's such a sweet story with some definite honest heart in it. very excited to see where you take it! :)
schedule June 12, 2012 at 12:00 AM
hahahahah paulie... hahahha
oh god, they're so cute!
I loved the chapter, though it had to wait a long time for it. Just glad that you updated.
Anyway my email is arya_arsay@hotmail.com
if you could add me to your mailing list, I'd be very grateful. Thanks :)
schedule June 12, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Yay!!!!!! He has a name. Paulie isn't too bad of a one either. I must admit I'm glad Fin liked the couple program. it was very sweet and I think Paulie is beginning to thankful understand his feelings. great job!
person animekid
schedule June 5, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Is there a way to get alerts for stories? Because there are so many stories, like this one, that I want to keep reading but I can't remember them all.

Future and modern in one? Sign me up! I also like where this is going too.
person animekid
schedule June 5, 2012 at 12:00 AM
-covers nose-

Only kink I can think of is dress up for future sexy times. As a girl, as a maid, as a butler, I don't even care as long as it's kinky.

Hell I don't care if you don't use that idea; I like this story period. I'm going to f5 and PRAY that it doesn't get lost in my bookmarks, because I might cry.
schedule April 29, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Wohooooooooooooo. only 2nd chapter. and the AI is already programming in 'feelings'! is actually FEELING the feelings!
This is an interesting development, this is and interesting point to read from! :D Wohoooo, yay~ to actually get to see (read) the process in which this nameless being begins FEELING. yay man yay, and to think Finn is quite oblivious to what's going on in the young boy's head. Hehe~
Finn's a nice guy... I wonder what options and settings he will make use of. O_O Finn finn....... this AI is beginning to 'like' you, what with the 'feeling light he might float' and all... so i wonder if 'hurting his feelings' are gnna be possible soon... if so, then what. Nice nice. I'm looking forward to it all :D

Yay! we get to suggest kinks? how bout DP (as in double anal penetration XD) how're you gonna achieve that with Finn's one cock? i dunno, add in a dildo or smthing. this kink might not even win (its rare?) hah! with the whole option settings, have him be okay with it, sorta-unsure if he's liking it or not, but going with it, then being more than the simple 'it stings' afterwards. (coz seriously, this sort of kink needs the sub in some sorta sexual high to accept that amount of stretching) xD do AI's play the sub-aftercare role, for 'owners' that WANT to fuss and baby their partners? that'd be nice, instead of the "default" of AI's always being on the abusive end. it'd be nice seeing them getting some TLC eh~

Well, looking forward to more from you~
- nekoii
schedule April 29, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Oi yay! The last robot one I really liked only went for like 3 chapters and was never finished. :(
But this one looks good! I'm glad you had the company accelerate his age because I wouldn't be able to read it if it was a pedo story. What a great start! On to chapter 2!
schedule April 29, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Oh this is cute. I like this. You could have a lot of fun with this. I can't wait to see what you come up with. I'm a sucker for an eager slave/relunctant master, and with Finn's personality so far, I think that would be hillarious.

Love the scene where the AI was grabbing on the sheets "Or else he'd wash away" wonderful imagery. I like that the AI has some personality, but is too naive for his own intelligence. It will be interesting to see how fast he will adapt.
person dut
schedule April 28, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I Like! Its such a change from other robot stories... this one definitely more thing going on...
schedule April 28, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I so just added this story to my favourites. I love your work. I've been going through your story list with delight. Can't believe you're ESL... Then again, so am I and most people don't notice. Mind if I ask what language?

Keep up the excellent work!